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this is all most sounding like Gearing just needs a full shut down and reboot well that and one hell of a recharge.
hum wonder of there is a nuclear reactor around he can go sit in for a week for a recharge?
Sorry for missing commenting the last two chapters, I have been very busy with classes and commissions. I did enjoy the read and I did like enjoy Seeing Gearing struggling so much in that situation, it helps to show what where is surreal limits and seeing him team up with the rest of the gang. I am glad that Handy had finally warmed up to Gearing and think of him as a pony, now I think he might be the turn for gearing to actually find himself putting his trust Handy with his life and his way of doing things and comply with his instructions, and not give in making unilateral decisions for the rest of the team which is a source of a lot of strain in their relations for the rest of them at least consulting them before making a irrevocable decision that they can all stand by. I did like seeing that Swift and Handy where trying to come up with their own solution in trying to recue gearing with improvising what they had at hoof and not having them as helpless bystanders.
It's a shame that Gearing didn't get the chance to talk with the core would have loved to see if he would have rejected the offer like BJ did or not.
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No worries! The story and I aren't going anywhere, so don't feel the need to rush. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I hope your classes went well and that the commissions have picked up for you.
And, yup, in my stories all of the characters have their own dealies going on. Everycreature has their own strengths and weaknesses, and I try to show that and stick to that. In some cases, and some instances, some ARE completely useless, or worse an actual hindrance. Gearing for example would make an absolutely HORRIBLE life guard at a pool / beech. I mean, yeah, he could circle around in the air endlessly to keep an eye on things. But if he tried to jump in the water to save anyone, he'd end up drowning them trying to get them back to shore by walking there. Bad Jammin.
Also, and as usual, there was ALSO more going on than what had been showed, and this section might be over, but it's going to be revisited and things revealed a bit more later on. I don't wanna give anything away because well spoilers...
But I WILL say that the story is FAR from over so some of your points might just be on the horizon. ;)