From what i’m reading you have a good idea of how the universe works and I am very much enjoying the writing style. Can’t wait to see where you take the story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Considering that his reaction, for the moment, to any pony other than the nurse is to run away screaming, I don't think so.
Speaking of the nurse, are you sure that it's supposed to be Nurse Sweetheart? 'Cause Nurse Sweetheart is a slightly chubby earth pony with a pink coat and a pink and white striped mane. The description in the story fits Nurse Redheart, though.
Overall the story's good, as far as that goes what with this only being the second chapter.
I think you are doing well so far. At least that is my opinion.
From what i’m reading you have a good idea of how the universe works and I am very much enjoying the writing style. Can’t wait to see where you take the story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Considering that his reaction, for the moment, to any pony other than the nurse is to run away screaming, I don't think so.
Speaking of the nurse, are you sure that it's supposed to be Nurse Sweetheart? 'Cause Nurse Sweetheart is a slightly chubby earth pony with a pink coat and a pink and white striped mane. The description in the story fits Nurse Redheart, though.
Overall the story's good, as far as that goes what with this only being the second chapter.
9491014
I didn't realize that there was actually a nurse sweetheart...whoops.
Too late now!
9491027
Ah, well that explains it.
9565857
Ah, good to know.
9630596
When is the next update coming up please tell me
9630599
Hopefully within the next week
9631507
Thanks i look forward to it