9379615 I would say he considered her as a really close friend up till when they have their time in his bed at the end and effectively asked if he wants to be her boyfriend.
This is something I want to build on in a future story as well, like say a he has a memory to when they went to the mall and they picked up her shirts or them watching a movie before the show starts where Red Quill is on the television.
Jasmine, being new to the town, has probably clung to Patch as tight as possible. Doing so, she got to see what he’s really like by (accidentally) putting him under the strain of caring for this person who just entered his what used to be till then (with a few exceptions), a dull, ordinary life. Another thing could be is that Pop knows a little about him and told how much of a softie he really is; much like how Ma Bushel tells her when they get the burgers, but probably in a way that she’s egging her on to take him.
(And yes, there shall be more stories in the future for peeps to read about their adventures ^^)
But seriously this is pretty good I wanna see if they can move beyond this and develop a full relationship. I know stuff like this happens. A good friend of mine did almost exactly this. Helped a girl out he didn't know and boom they have been married for almost a decade now and on kid number 3. So all you doubters out there, yes love works in weird ways. It's just rare.
Seriously, this is dear to me because it is almost an exact reenactment of how me and my wife got together. We've been together for 12 years now, and we have our final child on the way.
And reading this? It puts a tear in my eye, remembering the awesome way we met. The passion, the excitement, the nervousness... Yeah, you did fucking good. I don't cry easy. Period. You have made me cry more times in the past few months with this story than I've cried in years. My wife can attest to that. I hadn't cried since our twins were born, and here you come, making me weep tears of joy.
I'm saving each chapter in a doc, so I can remember this beauty of a story.
hmm i like this fic both porn and story good to see
Its an incredibly cute story. Not drowned out by the lazy use of sex and porn. This story has substance, a goal. The characters are enjoyable.
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Agreed, finaly something raunchy that does not devolve into pure porn after a couple of senyences.
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I would say he considered her as a really close friend up till when they have their time in his bed at the end and effectively asked if he wants to be her boyfriend.
This is something I want to build on in a future story as well, like say a he has a memory to when they went to the mall and they picked up her shirts or them watching a movie before the show starts where Red Quill is on the television.
Jasmine, being new to the town, has probably clung to Patch as tight as possible. Doing so, she got to see what he’s really like by (accidentally) putting him under the strain of caring for this person who just entered his what used to be till then (with a few exceptions), a dull, ordinary life. Another thing could be is that Pop knows a little about him and told how much of a softie he really is; much like how Ma Bushel tells her when they get the burgers, but probably in a way that she’s egging her on to take him.
(And yes, there shall be more stories in the future for peeps to read about their adventures ^^)
Excuse me while I use this,
"WANT MOAR! MOOOOOOOOOAR!"
But seriously this is pretty good I wanna see if they can move beyond this and develop a full relationship. I know stuff like this happens. A good friend of mine did almost exactly this. Helped a girl out he didn't know and boom they have been married for almost a decade now and on kid number 3. So all you doubters out there, yes love works in weird ways. It's just rare.
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Yes! That’s pretty much how I plan to have them. I’m planning to get more in the future of them.
There is one thing I must say to all of this...
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Seriously, this is dear to me because it is almost an exact reenactment of how me and my wife got together. We've been together for 12 years now, and we have our final child on the way.
And reading this? It puts a tear in my eye, remembering the awesome way we met. The passion, the excitement, the nervousness... Yeah, you did fucking good. I don't cry easy. Period. You have made me cry more times in the past few months with this story than I've cried in years. My wife can attest to that. I hadn't cried since our twins were born, and here you come, making me weep tears of joy.
I'm saving each chapter in a doc, so I can remember this beauty of a story.
How's it coming?
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The next part of this story continues in https://www.fimfiction.net/story/378991/7/the-layers-of-death-metal/there-goes-the-bride
Oh yeah, I'm really digging this pair~
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Haha yeah. Jas be a species that MLP really only dug up from the grave of gen 1 for the movie :P
Are you going to be updating this at all
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Yes, there will be an update soon. It’s just been in a massive backlog of other projects both for Ranchtown and other series not on here
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Get the lead out floofy! Want to see more of this Bring! /)
Oh wow
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XD it’s coming! Calico64 has to do other things before they can get to the these two again
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Is this just part of a larger (series of) storie(s)?
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https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/780822/the-list This is a list of all of the stories in this series. They are all in my stories library. Enjoy.
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update soon?
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Soon enough
Already regreating there is no sequel to this. Amazing story! ♡