noice. I really like where this is going, you continue time and again to prove your mastery of the word Cali. Can't wait to see where this story goes, and what future stories await!
Very nice intro for Jasmine. I really like her determination and the demonstration of how far she is willing to go for her dreams, and that she didn't put up with what Butterscotch Bakery was doing.
What that company did to her reminds me of something someone I know who works with at-risk youths once told me about how some modern slavers operated. By isolating someone from their family, their friends, and anything else that would allow the victim to do anything to leave and earn a living, they make the victim believe that they have nowhere to go, and thus no choice but to do what they say. Since their victims were not physically held prisoner, only socially, financially, and psychologically, it is very hard to prove a case in a court of law. Usually when such slavers are caught the only legal action that sticks is a law suit brought on the victim's behalf.
Based on the disconnect between the reputation of the company for superior baking goods and the incompetence they displayed in handling Pearl Necklace's wedding cake, I have to wonder if what they were doing to Jasmine was how they got most of their highly competent bakers who gave them such a good reputation in the first place.
The pacing on the ending gave me whiplash. How did they develop so much intrest in each other so quickly? I mean the closest they were prior romantically was her flashing him when she had a bigger problem than him seeing her nude but then -
“I can’t deny that I care about you, and I couldn’t bare the thought if something were to happen to you.”
He has a spontanious development of romance And
“Even if I did lose everything. Even if I hadn’t gotten the job from Pearl and even if I never saw my home again, at least I had you.”
Then hes such a hot stud she wouldn't mind losing her prior life?
They havent even known one another for 24 hours and they are confessing this much emotion. We even SAW what she was thinking when everything was going up in flames, it wasnt "at least I still have that one cute guy who helped me out"
Im all for a cheesy romance but I was kinda hoping to have some develop rather than a hard scene cut to them cuddling and kissing. (Still an interesting story im going to keep up with!)
noice. I really like where this is going, you continue time and again to prove your mastery of the word Cali. Can't wait to see where this story goes, and what future stories await!
They are lucky
Adorable, fluffy and positive, perfect thingie for boosting morale.
Literally knew she was Australian from the second line from her mouth.
Very nice intro for Jasmine. I really like her determination and the demonstration of how far she is willing to go for her dreams, and that she didn't put up with what Butterscotch Bakery was doing.
What that company did to her reminds me of something someone I know who works with at-risk youths once told me about how some modern slavers operated. By isolating someone from their family, their friends, and anything else that would allow the victim to do anything to leave and earn a living, they make the victim believe that they have nowhere to go, and thus no choice but to do what they say. Since their victims were not physically held prisoner, only socially, financially, and psychologically, it is very hard to prove a case in a court of law. Usually when such slavers are caught the only legal action that sticks is a law suit brought on the victim's behalf.
Based on the disconnect between the reputation of the company for superior baking goods and the incompetence they displayed in handling Pearl Necklace's wedding cake, I have to wonder if what they were doing to Jasmine was how they got most of their highly competent bakers who gave them such a good reputation in the first place.
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Part of me wants to do a storyline involving the company, but that will have to wait. Thanks for the comment.
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**wiggles finger guns** bang on xD
This story now holds a very special place in my heart. Well fucking done, mate. Well fucking done.
The pacing on the ending gave me whiplash. How did they develop so much intrest in each other so quickly? I mean the closest they were prior romantically was her flashing him when she had a bigger problem than him seeing her nude but then -
He has a spontanious development of romance
And
Then hes such a hot stud she wouldn't mind losing her prior life?
They havent even known one another for 24 hours and they are confessing this much emotion. We even SAW what she was thinking when everything was going up in flames, it wasnt "at least I still have that one cute guy who helped me out"
Im all for a cheesy romance but I was kinda hoping to have some develop rather than a hard scene cut to them cuddling and kissing.
(Still an interesting story im going to keep up with!)
A new species in town~! Gotta say you made it work really well in the story. I love the relationship with Patch and Jasmine~
I come for clop, it was amazing. But now I am invested in the great storyline! Great story so far ♡