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PRONOUNCED: sem ee yawn || any character i ever write, ever, is 18+ unless explicitly stated otherwise

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The fic description cleared my skin and added years to my life. 😂
Really, really cute and sexy story!

Adorable, and certainly well done. +1 well deserved.

Very cute story, write a sequel~

I've always loved sandbar, I just picture him as the chilled surfer dude of the group

Awwww, this was such a sweet story. They were super cute at the end there. I loved it.

Smolder and Sandbar snuggle and then she eats his ass.

Well, that description certainly doesn't beat around the bush.

It's always nice to read wholesome stories about good friends. Thank you.

Very nice story, nice bit of story and didn't seem awkward or forced at any part, the only part that seemed like that was that sandbar was already 'rock hard'. Other then that it all blended pretty well.

Both descriptions are some of the best parts of this fic lol.

Short, sweet and too the point.

Comment posted by Shenzy deleted Mar 20th, 2019

“I missed you,” she admitted.
...
“That’s a weird thing for you to say.”

Her saying same but with some struggle or... "Sucks less to be alone with you around"
Same message but in character.

I guess it's easy to fall for getting soft n mushy, but every character should have it's own way to express it. I kinda feel sad many sound Blue eyed instead of (them) figuring out how to go about it.

Aside of that it's nice story.
No mandatory 69... Which is refreshing and does fit nicely

With a rhythm built up, Smolder leaned forward, rubbing her cheek against his squishy butt before sticking her snout in between his cheeks and snorting in his scent like some sort of junkie. Her eyes rolled into the back of her head as she did so,

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>Cute characters and character interaction
>Genuinely erotic lewdness
>Lewd activities made convenient by cartoon logic
>Cartoonish (lack of) consequences
>Well written

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“You get what you want?” Sandbar asked.

“Do you feel admired?” she asked back. “Do you feel like a jewel in my hoard? Like a precious gem that I’d kill for?”

A goofy smile lit up his face. “A little.”

“Then, yeah,” she closed her eyes, nuzzling into his chest. “I did.”

Relationship goals. Friendship, or romantic. The bravery to express how much someone means to you so openly and honestly is great. This was very well written. Dense and lovely.

i come back to say this
hot, yet wholesome

“So,” he murmured sleepily. “What’s up? I thought you had other plans for today.”

“I missed you,” she admitted.

Though her eyes were currently closed, she felt him stare at her, wide-eyed and curious.

“That’s a weird thing for you to say.”

“I know,” she said, squeezing his hoof again. “But it’s true.”

Awww, reading that little bit puts a smile on my face. Smolder missing Sandbar, the dragon likes him

“You get what you want?” Sandbar asked.

“Do you feel admired?” she asked back. “Do you feel like a jewel in my hoard? Like a precious gem that I’d kill for?”

A goofy smile lit up his face. “A little.”

“Then, yeah,” she closed her eyes, nuzzling into his chest. “I did.”

Love it! Sandbar is part of her hoard and she’ll kill for him and protect him! Smolder is a excellent and protective girlfriend. This has made me ship them in a way. Love it!!

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