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I am an Anti-Brony, I hate MLP, so why am I here? Read this...! https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/769267/if-im-an-anti-brony-why-am-i-on-this-site

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NOT A RE-CREATION

A stingy, grouchy banker is invited by Twilight to the Hearths Warming gathering, but things go horribly wrong resulting in a ruined Hearths Warming for many.

That night, it is TWILIGHT, not the banker who is visited by three spirits to teach her something about other ponies, and how Hearths Warming isn't all that it's cracked up to be!

LESSONS: Don't judge someone without first understanding their true background and reasons.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 20 )

*After carefully reading* Hmm. This is going to be a bit different.

Whoa. This went dark real fast. Just as I predicted, this is going to be something a bit different. But then again in reality. Some might have a happy Christmas and some will not.

This story is pretty good, and makes sense. I can get why he was so grumpy on such a holiday, but didn't let it ruin him fully, if he did would been much harsher and a true scrooge.

This reminds me of a Christmas episode of some show watched a long time ago, there was a character who was well a jerk, but around the holidays he really got angry and grouchy.
After a huge fight he was leaving a christmas party, and paused to answer a question.

Why he hated the holidays, every christmas, everything would go wrong and he lose everything, his family survived but barely and always wound up homeless.

:fluttercry: YOUR STORY WAS ENOUGH TO MAKE A GROWN MAN CRY! AND THAT’S OKAY.

Sniff you go on ahead tear. *teardrop fell to the floor*

Don't get me wrong, Twilight is know fully well to be not as perfect as any other...

-Lesson Zero: When she became obsessed with solving a friendship problem

-Marks for Efforts: When she brashly blamed the CMC for something they didn't do and without thoroughly examining things.

...ect, ect, ect

So, it is QUITE understood that Twilight would work in such a hurried haste, that she'd make mistakes and not realize them off the bat

And let’s not forget when her anger goes way too far.
Example: in the MLP Movie, she was so angry that she nearly almost blasted Pinkie with her magic.

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I've often been surrounded by characters like Miser Stash-- work so hard, try their best to fit in, and still they are punished and gain nothing from their good deeds (As if a curse is placed upon them so they can never be happy, but just the guy who makes everyone else look good)

This story reminds me of the Muslim who changed the oil in my car wishing me a Merry Christmas, instead of a 'happy holiday' like all the other politically 'correct' sheeple have been doing all week. The 'holyday' didn't seem to bother him much. He even offered me a bowl of candy canes.

The moral of the story would be...to each their own. Don't tell me I have to like something and I won't have tell you to eff off! :)

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Glad to see someone finally gets the message... thanks

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She also freed the 6 pony pillars, and released the pony of shadows (Despite the circumstances, she nearly doomed everyone)

Little late commenting this story ending.

I liked it, it a sad bitter ending but...that is life, not everything goes well, and the worst things can happen on the suppose happiest days.
I'm sad for that poor pony, and he had every right to be angry if not furious, all in the end they can hope for is maybe just maybe be find his peace.

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My haters keep whining that Miser should've been visited by the spirits...

Nuh-uhn... it was Twilight who did wrong did this time, and SHE who needed to learn. Miser didn't do anything really wrong anyway.

But I guess some people need to be visited by ghosts themselves (Like the haters)

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Well haters are haters. They love to hate.

i know its probably sappy, but i would've added one more thing to the story. an epilogue where twilight receives a letter from miser years later saying "you are forgiven"

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But like I told you before, I don't really believe in forgiveness... and I'm glad to see the guilt eat Twilight alive.

The plot just resolved itself. Nobody will learn anything. What should Twilight change about herself? Being a self-centered jackass who only cares about circumstances directly affecting herself?

Why are people assholes to Miser for shallow reasons? Wait, it's to make Miser look good.

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She's Twilight Sparkle, and she's only good for one thing...

...Target Practice

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You constantly show the idea of Twilight being tortured over and over again and portray it as well deserved even though it's really not. That's why Twilight is sympathetic while your self-inserts are unsympathetic.

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I'm not looking for Sympathy, and even if I was... I don't see it in Twilight, nor do I want it from her.

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