StillFunk
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Wow nice job
How do I delete someone else's story?
You can't hahaha
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or you can go to your profile settings and turn off Show Mature option.
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Let's not be rude.
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Don't mind me lol, just meming.
What was so awful about your previous story?
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I put all the emphasis I possibly could on how disgusting the experience was. And there was loads of scat stuff.
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thx :)
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Meme all you want, dude, It should kinda be expected when you're writing fetish stuff (Especially this fetish). 🙃
I do kinda wish there were tags for specific fetishes, though, so uninterrested people wouldn't have to look at stuff like this when browsing the front page. 🤔
Downvoted for deviantART fetish.
Hey just a question as I'm liking your story's but would you possibly do a story with spike, big mac, shining armor, ember, smolder, or troubleshoes?
I find your username very fitting.
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Only as victims. I only do female dom.
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OK so is that for all them or would ember or smolder be fine?
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Maybe... Probably won't do non-pony. But maybe.
What the fuuuuuuck.......
I didnt even read the half of it and i already want to throw up...
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That's what you get for purposefully reading something you knew would disgust you. I'm honestly not really sure what you expected to find in "A Stinky Torture Session (Scat)", nor why you read nearly half of it before you stopped. Is this one of those things where someone can't quite confront a fetish they're ashamed of having?
Hmm...the return of the why boner....
Ehh...It's not the content that's off, it's just that the writing feels...sorta bland. This happened, and then this, and then this. No build-up, no personality, and grammatically incorrect sentences paired with run-ons do it no favors.
tis...simply...boring.
I can't believe I wrote that sentence.
Examples:
As nose and anus finally touched, you felt an instant urge to throw up, you had never done anything like this, and the musky smell was too much to take even a single whiff of, but Twilight demanded you to sniff it, and as her prisoner you where to do exactly as she told you to Run on. I think you might have a comma instead of a period in there. These issues are abundant though and make the tale all that much harder to read, fetish fodder or not.
You took a small breath, but didn't feel like any air was gained, do to Twilights anus being placed tightly against your nose,
Due. You want 'Due' in here.
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Yeah, can't claim this is incredible writing or anything. I just put as much smut in as I could fit, and I think that works decently for what it is, but it's definitely nothing grand.
If you want a story of the same genre with more character and better pacing, might I recommend this: A Fart Slave for Fillies
I do like my run-on sentences, though. I think most of them read pretty crispy. Yim yum.
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Well if you're happy with it!
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Eh, semi. This is not my proudest story. But it's also my oldest one. (Wrote it years before uploading here.)
Thanks for the criticism, though.
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^^
Glad you liked it.
I'm not super proud of this one, lol. Really awkward grammar.
Pass the unsee juice my bro
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