I write very smelly femdom stories
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Oh you always push all my buttons! Please make a second part when Celestia gets back and they "move on".
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Considering it... I like the self-contained aspect of this, though
Good stuff, lad.
For me, someone who loves emotions and feelings in porn, this is an interesting switch in style. Admittedly, it's harder to fap to, as one has to enable brains instead of finding keywords, "Ahhh, keyword_a, ohhhh, keyword_b! Keyword_c into keyword_d while keyword_e? I came!" But I'm not to be deterred by the inconvenience of using brains. I came to come and I succeeded.
Still, the story is a little short and there're ways to improve it.
How does the knobby part glue to lips? It's firm, it doesn't even smear much. If you avoid spamming with fap-worthy keywords, getting the facts perfectly becomes way more important as they keep imagination working.
You keep avoiding naming and describing what people came here for for several paragraphs.
I'm confused. How can anyone stop Chrysalis from committing a suicide? If there were failed attempts, it's worth describing. If there weren't, it's probably best to explain what's keeping her willing to live — a hope of finding a changeling who survived to restore the hive maybe?
You may also want to mention she's still eating shit during all these existential thoughts, you know, to keep fappers interested. :) But that's up to you.
This is... Kinda different from the story you make, unique even. Look like the role got reverse for chrysalis here, then the "from princess to privy"
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Certainly ^^
I did go for a super unique style here.
Do you think it works?
Thx for the follow btw.
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Ehh
Wat?