What does the being who represents loyalty do when those they are loyal to abandon them?
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This is all on Celestia's head, for being a ruler of Equestria she made so many mistakes., Sunset, how she handled sending the elements to do all the dirty work, and now the wedding and finally how she handled all this.
I hope in the end she steps down when it all revealed. I hope Rainbow turns her back on Fluttershy, as she destroyed what friendship she had.
you know I hope they realize how much they bucked up
The Mane Five think Dash is lying too. And you’ve officially lost me. Bye everypony, have fun being imprisoned and enslaved once the Queen destroys your kingdom.
Enjoy karma Mane Five Backstabbers and Sunbutt. I hope Rainbow Dash gets a better new life away from a doom kingdom.
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Have you read the title?
In all due reality, things will get better for her. It will be a while, but it will happen.
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I think I liked it more when she was kind of hunted and stuff like that. Now it looks like you want us to forgive the main six easier in the future.
I hope you didn't got the idea you did something wrong just because we where against the main six or Celestia for the memory deleeting thing. I like it when they feel like a good Villain but when it's still not to much. I'm always excited for the moment when they get to feel what they did was wrong.
Will there be any scene at all where they have to interact with her again ?
In some situations I'm never really sure if I like how the stare is used, like when they talk as if it really has that magic stop (paralyse effect.) One example would be is when she would be able to use that on characters from different worlds or the evilest villains.
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I just hope her living a better life won't just be 2 chapters of the story or that there is a second book to the story.
There's no build up to this, it just goes from 0-100.
Like, really, why isn't Chrysalis running fucking Equestria?! What POSSIBLE reason is there to pivot from her original plan to discrediting Rainbow, giving Cadance back somehow reasonably healthy, and mind controlling everyone to this extent?! Seriously, it makes no fucking sense! If she can get everyone this stupid easy, why bother invading?
Between the lack of explanation or detail, and typos, this is close to a dislike for me.
I am sorry but what kind of shitty friends are they?
I am frustrated at the trial being biased and one-sided. I am also intrigued at how Chrysalis’ manipulation of the others has played out so well for her. I can’t help but wonder, since she took Cadance’s role, if she is actually in a coma right now or if she somehow had a changeling take the spot while she’s off being one of the other two judges or something, basically guaranteeing 3/4 of the judges trying to get her out of Equestria.
For a while you actually had me wondering if this were some sort of AU where Cadence actually was Cadence, but now on top of feeling trepidation for Dash, I have to feel worried over Equestria’s national security. The thing is that I don’t really care for Equestria, just the drama with the other Elements. Spike is bound to notice something is off with Twilight, so will he be replaced too? Will all of them be replaced? Then of course there is drama with the princesses. Will Luna be interested in secretly investigating this? I certainly hope so, I do so love reading about Best Pony saving the day.
For some reason you made a bunch of readers turn away by stacking everything against Dash. I don’t really care about that as long as the story is fun, and I don’t see why anyone would be as long as it is. I’m continuing on to the next chapter, so please, don’t despair!
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I would be stupid not to admit the other side having some strong points. I agree with DivinePanzer here - Chrysalis is able to manipulate or outright replace every single character in this MLP universe that could stop her from taking over Equestria. So then... what is she doing again? Assuming she wants to take over, and her not having anything really there stopping her, she should totally be able to win right now. As the story stands, up to the point of the end of this chapter, at this current time, there is a lack of explanation that I find annoying.
But oh well! Still seems like it will be a fun story. And you are pretty great at writing this from Dash’s perspective as well. Besides, you said there would be interludes explaining things in greater detail, so it’s all good in my eyes.
Ah, don't worry Dash, if they abandoned you that quickly then they weren't that great of friends anyway.
Move on, learn to support yourself, don't look back.
Don't question their reasoning, keep pushing forward, don't look back.
Drive yourself to be better, get out of bed purely to spite those who wished you would have died in you sleep, don't look back.
What ever you do, don't look back. You won't like what you see.
Well now, that's some dandy mind control they've got going, or perhaps lead powder in the food? Only reason I can think of for being so focused. Really, Fluttershy's known Rainbow her whole life, and she thinks Rainbow is even capable of lying to her like that?
Yeah there's a reason why Canterlot Wedding was the main hatefic/fixfic bait before Anonymous popped up. Everyone who isn't mind controled was taking grade A stupid pills, (yes even Twilight). Except Luna, who obviously took a while bottle of sleeping pills since the canon explanation is she slept through everything.