What does the being who represents loyalty do when those they are loyal to abandon them?
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I kinda want to see how the Mane 5 are doing. Twilight would have to remember the time they had between her and Rainbow while she was tranced right? Otherwise it would be her crying on Cadence and seeing the green glow from her horn then suddenly in the alley behind Donut Joes. Wouldn't that raise a few suspicions considering Shining Armor was facing similar problems and he actually had a barrier up? Also what about the fact that Twilight knew something was off about Cadence beforehand, and reminder she knew Cadence pretty much all her life as a cheerful, peppy, alicorn with great advice. So to just suddenly turn into a snobby, uptight bitch without a second thought? Very peculiar.....
I really think the seeds of doubt and guilt should come into play here. Considering that Rainbow was the most loyal out of all of them even when she acted like a idiot and still defended her friends.
Also, HOW WAS HER TRIAL STATEMENT IRRELEVANT TO THE CASE?! Seriously Celestia did you have your own head stuck up that cake engorged ass of yours that you forgot that everyone has their right to say the truth and that all comments and answers should be considered evidence?! What the ever living fuck is wrong with you?!
If Equestria falls in this then Rainbow has to come save their sorry asses I'll be glad cause then they'll realize their mistakes and by then a simple sorry and ask for forgiveness is out the fucking window.
Sorry needed to vent the issues..
Oh my god I fucking love this. Exiled fics are my fetish
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what dash went through is called a kangaroo court. the whole thing was a show for the public.
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I think that the best thing now for the story, is to firmly establish RD new life in this outlawland.
This way, when we come back to those left in Equestria, and their POV, it will be a natruall point to have a timeskip if the Author wish to use it.
For the Equestria crew, the could have one chapter dedicated for the immediate aftermath where they are still are set on RD's guilt.
Next - where the fallout between those who belived in her guilt and those who didn't.
Third - A new problem rears it's head towards Equstria.
(alternativ...where doubt starts to set in on those who belived in her guilt. And they start to properly research the event.)
Fourth - Timeskip to RD, and soon she hears about the Equestrias new problem. Not her problem...
The changelings get affected be this new problem and Chrysalis more or less tells the Equestrian crew they needs (all of) the elements to fix this.
To get them agree to restore the elements, she admit to how she set up RD.... the big Fallout starts to set in. They try to search for RD.
Good chapter.
were those Urgals, Ra'zac, or Dugs (Selbuba)?
Odd, if her flight magic works then her weather magic ought to be just as functional. That's a function of her own abilities, it shouldn't be location-specific.
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It could be becouse its a natural cloud and not a factory made one