Nice

I thought estrous cycles were season dependent.

Dude..... I love this

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my cannon is that they are unique to each mare, their evolution from seasonal heats is now more that mares can have periods of estrous depending on genetics. Some only have heat once every two months, some have heats that last a day but end up happening way more than others, some still follow seasonal lines, some just have no reaction at all but can still have foals at any time

Wait so the herd consists of twilight Aaron(pokemon has ruined that name for me) ivory, pinkie and Molly redheart

I approve

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So herds can be very dynamic in structure

For this herd so far its

Aaren-Ivory-Twilight as the main group

Aaren will later start to see Molly, but Molly isnt in a romantic relationship with Twilight or Ivory however she is considered a herdmate because of her relationship with Aaren.

Twilight and Pinkie are in a very close relationship but she is both sexually intimate with Aaren and Ivory but mainly focuses on Twilight because Pinkie loves Twilight but also wants to love on her herd.

Dynamics in herds are a tad confusing but they are very healthy when it comes to having relationships with those in the main group and outside of it.

Basically any truly healthy polyamorous relationships allow others to love who they love, and they always get together and talk. Ponies themselves have a culture that is incredibly trusting of others and love is shared freely with others be it platonic or intimate.

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Huh I did not know that Thanks

I like this. This gives me the warm fuzzies; just good feelings all over. I needed this. Thank you.

Give me more!!!

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*gives you about three paragraph of rough draft third chapter* owo

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Thank you.

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You are welcome Ero-Sannin-sensei!!!
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Haha! I really can't wait for more of your story, it's an interesting concept to say the least.

I hope the story continues

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It will! I'm working on it!

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Then I will let you work purple book horse

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You got any suggestions or hopes for the next chapter?

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Maybe have the human get taught equestria etiquette, social rules, and he intern tells him the difference between worlds like how he would feel like he's cheating on them because it was hammers into him that only two people could be together at a time

More plz

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You need any help?

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Kinda Its just the small stuff that grinds me to a halt, like romantic dialogue and hell writing their date is just taking waaaay to long

why do I do this to myseeelllff!

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To fill a hole that your real life
Lacks

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True

And somewhat too real :<

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sorry

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Next chapter?