Daring Do and her partners, Comet Scroll, and Sun Flora, as agents of an undercover organization known simply as 'Warehouse 13', work to gather artifacts, dangerous objects that grant the user strange and powerful abilities, but always at a cost. It's up to them to protect ponies from these dangerous objects, and themselves.
Relatively meanwhile, the Doctor brings along a new company through out space and time: two ponies who appear very knowledgeable of the surreal, and very capable of saving ponies from even the most dangerous of situations.
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Alright, I'm interested. Never heard of this 'Warehouse 13' nonsense, though.
>>Tehmustachedbiscuit
Yes the Warehouse is in the middle of no where, no, there is no alien technology, and kind of, not all of the artifact (the various things) are ancient, quite a few are related to recent events from actual history
Sounds really interesting, though it may end up being a copy-paste crossover, which isn't good. Also, there are two errors I noticed (considering I'm a reviewer, that's pretty good).
>once the Warehouse calls you; you're...
That semicolon should be a comma.
There was also another instance of the same thing, but I can't seem to find it.
Anyway, I'll be watching this to see how it goes.
Cheers!
-Figments
>>Figments
Trust me, outside the concept, there will be no similarities if I can help it. Mainly because all the artifacts from the show have to do with things that never happened in Equestria. Not to mention this is also to some degree, this is a Dr. Hooves cross over, and copy- pasting plots from the show just doesn't work with the 'wibby wobby timey wimey stuff'
You might want to change the title. Marehouse 13 is already being used. And it's been up since February. Marehouse 13
Other than that, I'll check it out right now and add a new comment. Oh, and there should be a reply button on comments, and it doesn't look like your using it.
So I'm guessing you took inspiration from what happened with Donna for Derpy. Interesting.
Thoughts on the story:
Very good. I want to see where this'll go.
Something to fix is the grammar. Several of those semicolons you used should actually be commas or periods.
Looking forward to more. As a fan of both Doctor Who(oves) and Warehouse 13, I'm curious to see how the two very different worlds can be blended....with ponies.
misteraibo.deviantart.com/art/The-Story-of-Starswirl-265783612 Starswirl the Bearded as Helena G. Wells, also Trixie Lulamoon as Emily Lake. Make it happen!
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So Starswirl gave the name, her brother gave the beard... like it, let's see where in the wibbily wobbily, OC rampent, original artifacts, crazy looping story I can fit that...
Oh, and while I'm commenting, new content coming very soon! been away planning the overarching plot, now it's time to start getting it written
1340596 Starswirl bronzed or whatever the marehouse does to ponies as a permanent way to time travel to in hopes to find an escape from her dead daughter and male-dominated world. She awoke one day to find things have gone horribly right. She attempted to set things right with the banners from the failed negotiations between the three races she kept hidden away, using them as a makeshift bomb of chaos and hatred, being diffused by placing Clover the Clever's on her. Upon her failure, the regent known as Mayor Mare used the Manus coin to replace her memories and identity with new ones. This new identity is known as Trixie Lulamoon.
I now have to go watch this show but I'm likening the story so far
I'm only reading this because I'm writing something a lot like this... This is such a coincidence...
I’d be so interested in seeing this continue