The story of eternal life and the curse that it brings. Follow Cadence as she tells the story of her life after the wedding. A sad tale of losing the ones we love.
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Omg,this is the first fanfic that makes me cry.....
I do this only because someone who can write at this level in such a short story would want to know. In Shining Armors funeral it's pallbearers not pole bearers. Also, send this to EQD. Its as good as anything I've seen on it.
>>Bronzedragon
Thanks for the spell check, I didn't know that word even existed, I got that fix.
And thanks for sending this to EQD, hope it gets up
Beautiful
Brilliant. Just brilliant. I hereby confer on this fic the Official Seal of Awesomeness.
Why is it that Celestia and Cadance get all the "Who wants to live forever" fanfics? I guess Luna already has enough angsty fanfics as is.
I found it kind of hard to follow the chronology of the narrative -- it felt like the narrator was skipping back and forth too much between different events and memories. Also, I was confused at times about the narrator's children vs. their spouses. I lost track of who was immortal, who was married to whom, and such. Thirdly, perhaps the inclusion of the CIA and the episode with Order were too much information and side-story to include with a story that focuses on a theme -- the Alicorn's curse. Either or both of those could easily be expanded into full stand-alone stories, but feel abbreviated and kinda 'jammed in'.
All that to say, I did like the story. This is the first Cadance "immortality lament" I've come across, and also the first that I've seen that includes offspring. I'd like to see more of the relationship between Cadance and her children -- do they resent her for her immortality? for passing on the 'curse'? for not passing on the 'curse'?
All in all, have 3 mustaches
