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Bronycommander


A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"

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This story is a sequel to Blood in the sand


Fate can be cruel. Fate can be kind. A widower has to take care of three lost ponies, but is he up to a bigger challenge? Something, he never thought might be possible.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 26 )

This is interesting. Finding 3 ponies that turned into foals in your neighborhood. It has a good start.

Am I still in R and D?

Also can I get a trenchgun?

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That comes in the just cause 4 Story i have planned. And i have something better for Speedy's counterpart

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I actually told you that before if you remember.

Have to admit that Midnight Blade has issues if she threatens with violence when someone pets her and calls her cute. Touchy-touchy! I guess the royal guards didn't teach her any manners.

I even wonder how Equestria has Star Wars, when it stars humans? I guess someone from the human world must have introduced it to Equestria the last time they appeared or something.

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I think you mean White Wolf, she's quite moody, similar to Rainbow Dash. And star wars, since Daring Do is the counterpart of Indiana Jones, Equestria could have a counterpart of Star Wars too, right? And what do you think of Chapter 2 and 3?

So Fritz makes his first appearance here. Awesome!
And that bastard Neo-Nazi got what was coming to him.

Raptormon132, I hope you like the cameo of your OC

Oh, me do like! :pinkiehappy:

Does this story takes place a year after Abacus Sum returns to Ponyville?

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Obviously...his trial and such happened here Way earlier, so Lily and keen could appear among the other foals.

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I meant his Recovery that took months before he returns to Ponyville.

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That too. Otherwise, Lily and keen couldn't have the same age as the other foals, right?

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Fact is, to be in cheerliee's Class, the Events of Abacus happened here Way earlier than in raptor's Story, when the Cmc wasn't born yet/still Babies, thus Lily and Eye having the same age and such

Why didn't you add the part where Fritz talks about Strike Law and Rogue Order as well as Storm Dasher, Coco Nut, Honey Blossom, and Buttercup's involvement in hurting Abacus?

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Because, this was all written by Raptor for me. And the kids don't have to konw every detail, do they?

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You do realize Lily and Keen are a alt universe here, not related to my star wars sequel

You think that the Canterlot Investigation Force was no stranger to committing war crimes?

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You ask the wrong guy, Raptor created them, so he knows

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