Tech Specs, a mysterious Unicorn Mare, arrives in Ponyville rather unexpectedly and painfully. This story revolves around her life, her home, her friends, and more.
By the way, with reference to the character list, this does NOT involve only one OC, but I've counted 27 of them.
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really great story so far!
No errors, at least as far as i can tell.
Now all you need is some art to put a picture to the story
Awesome story. Still can't explain the dislikes. Anyway, keep up the good work!
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Either A: The didn't like the fact that I killed off a character. B: They don't like stories entwining OC's and the Mane Six. C: They thought that I had too many OC's in the story. Or D: They are supercomputers sent to plague the internet with trolling until the end of time.
Oh, well. Thank you for your combinations of characters developed for use by the Anglo-Saxons which manifest kind thoughts directed towards myself and my piece of non-profit literature.
You thank me? Well, you're welcome. On my fic I have 3 dislikes. I had those dislikes from 10 minutes after I posted it. There are a lot of haters between the bronies. Keep up the good work :D d_b
Oh, well; as long as the Likes will outnumber the Dislikes, all should be well. I do like your story, by the way.
Tech Specs is an awesome pony name. My God that's so badassIdon'teven...
Unfortunately the dislikes have to go on and tarnish this... typical. I've never understood why people always frown upon OC fics that involve interactions with the mane 6. I suppose they've been exposed to so many idiotic self-inserts that their perception has become rather clouded. A shame, really.
Apart from a few technical issues I spotted, I don't see anything wrong with this story. If anything I really like it after reading the first chapter. This shall be marked as a 'to read' for later usage!
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I thank you sincerely, Good Sir. What technical issues have you spotted, if I might ask?
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Well, here's what I found...
Aw, you're welcome!
-In the first sentence you missed putting a 'was' between 'everypony' and 'going'. Normally it would do without it, but with a semi-colon it should be it's own stand-alone sentence, otherwise it ends up being a fragment.
-In the third paragraph, you have written "Fortunately for her, only was there, for she had no patients today, or at least not yet." I assume that the extra space was left there for Nurse Redheart's name?
-After that line, I would suggest that you indicate that Fluttershy is the one speaking, since you last mentioned Redheart in the previous paragraph.
-One last thing that confused me; Tech mentioned that she was flying around before she crashed into Fluttershy's house. She's a unicorn, and none of the other ponies reacted to that remark. I guess someone could assume that she might have cast a levitation spell on herself, but I think it's been established that only really powerful magical surges can cause them.
Just little things, nothing really much.
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Problems 1, 2, and 3 are solved. As for the fourth, I just switched a few words. Does that aid the clarity any? Thank you for pointing this out, by the way.
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No problem, and the word choice does work. I probably just should have reread it to begin with.
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Terribly sorry for the lack of clarity, Mate.
Great story. I am glad I have finally completed reading it. Truly wonderful work.
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I thank you sincerely, Good Sir. If I've erred anywhere that you've noticed, please inform me, if you will.
549363 erred? What does erred mean?
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To err means to make an error.
Loved the story!!!!!!! Sad but outstanding.
There is something wrong with this story.
It has too much epic win and not enough views.
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Thank you kindly, Madame.
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I don't mind that in the slightest, Good Sir. I thank you for your words, no less.