It was an average day for me. Get up, go to work, come back, eat, shower, sleep. But before I could do any of that I found a weird looking stone. And before I could think the stone shined bright, blinding me instantly.....
(This is my first time doing a story on here so some critique would be very nice. And there will be fetishy stuff in this, mostly foot fetish. And how much will be in each chapter will very, read at your own risk)
Some character breaks and lack of spell checking.
(Twilight would expect that the human wouldn't know her, so she shouldn't assume that Aaron will be confused for her not asking more questions.)
but the story itself have an unique approach. so I'll continue watching.
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Thanks, I'm trying to make this story as good as it can be and comments like thus help, so thanks
Aaron is the name of a pokemon so why do I keep seeing it so much in H.I.E?
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The i needs to be capitalized
capitalized names