After losing everything to her name to an Ursa Minor, Trixie is caught up with a ragtag group of ponies in a quest to save Equestria, with the help of Discord himself? She finds herself hounded by the Friendquisition, devout servants to harmony, and on the hunt for 'the Holy One', a mysterious and powerful entity who threatens to conquer Equestria.
The Great and Powerful Trixie and company go for broke as they race across Equestria and nearby kingdoms, searching for ancient relics of power (known as 'the Elements of Order') the Holy One seeks for its own devious goals. With the fate of Equestria on the line, can Trixie learn to live up to her title, 'the Great and Powerful'?
( Perhaps only if the wizard can finally learn why the hay everypony seems to think 'friendship' is the most powerful magic out there, and learn a few lessons about it along the way!)
Fascinating intro! This sounds very interesting, you can bet I'll stick around for it!
That being said,
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Original concept, epic potential plot, and above average self-editing.
It's a nice start with plenty of potential. I'll be checking on this to see if it keeps up.
You may want find someone to proofread for you though. There are some easily fixable errors that I came across that a simply read-through can fix.
Other than that, let's see what you can do.
Seems interesting. I shall track this and see where it goes.
Very intriguing start
Definitely keeping track of this one.
This has major potential as long as its funny. Make sure to keep the funny.
The title is what got me, so simple but so intriguing. This...is going to be good.
I didn't expect the Friendquisition...
I think I like where this is going.
(In all honesty, I was half expecting her to say, "murder, arson, and jaywalking, among other crimes.")
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Nobody expects the Friendquisition!
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I have waited for this day..for to long!
After the list of crime Ditzy read to Trixie, I am expecting this to be a very long Fic,
You also have my interest piqued.
Okay. Let's see how this meeting is going to go.
And so will start Trixie's adventures...as soon as she can find her way out of the Everfree Forest. Let's see what happens next.
Go team Chaos!!!!
All hail Chaos Undivided.
That feeling when you stumble across an interesting fanfic... read through an interesting opening... and find that it's been left unfinished for three years. And the author's gone for almost as long.