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Unicorncob


A snarky Irishman who likes making words happen. Princess Discord is best pony.

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Before Twilight Sparkle, before Sunset Shimmer, Princess Celestia had another personal student. An aspiring young wizard whose frustration led to one of the gravest acts of disobedience ever committed.

Today, the Princesses are the only ones who know she ever existed, and this is why they wanted it that way.


Just a little something I wrote the other day and decided to put up for the season. Hopefully it's adequately spooky.

Happy Halloween/Nightmare Night!

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Woah... that certainly fit the Nightmare Night mood. This should be featured.

One nitpick though, in the S7 finale, it is confirmed that the Royal Sisters didn’t know about the Pony of Shadows or what happened to Starswirl until then. So it doesn’t make sense that they would know it here.

But other than that, this was a great story to get into the spooky spirit! Well done!

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Slight oversight on my part, I haven't watched that episode in a while :twilightsheepish:

But glad you like it! :yay:

Nice, hope the rest of the story keeps up the good pace. I have high hopes! well done!

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I might write a follow-up, I have a few ideas in mind :pinkiehappy:
Thanks much! :yay:

I like it so far, but I did notice one mistake. I believe you meant to write Night Spark instead of Night Shade.

They pointed their horns at Night Spark and their magical blasts collided with the rainbow light to create a large, powerful blast that shot toward Night Shade.

Now I'm off to read chapter two!

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I knew I was gonna do that typo somewhere
Thanks for that! :yay:

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