Well, that escalated quickly.

This escalated rather quickly, but it also got good

Why dose t he JSU shoot him I mean cmon we’ve all seen raiders of the lost ark

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If you're asking why the OC doesn't shoot, He doesn't carry a gun. To him, guns are for cowards who can't fight properly, but if you're talking about the master of the dojo, he's a griffon, he can't shoot magic because he doesn't have a horn and plus, he's never used a gun, let alone know how to use it

I read this and I loved the progress you made from the last chapter by making your weakness into a strength out of nowhere. I have to admit, this chapter got me surprised on how much had changed with a few words. It went from punching and knocking out someone, to the attacker being knocked out themselves. Holy shet. 8o

The only things I have against this right now is that the pacing is going too fast. Like there was a lot of stuff that could've been exploited that you wrote that could be further explained instead of skimming it over like it's nothing. That's lost potential on something that could be worthwhile for the story. Other than that, this is getting good so far. I'll go ahead and keep it on watch. :)

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Thanks, I really appreciate the constructive criticism. Even though they're only three chapters long, I'm gonna try an extend them so that the pace won't be too fast

Will it be possible to see Queen Chrysalis and Fang with they’re kids in the third chapter?

Good chapter as always bro /)

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Idk man if I ever dealt with that ya know a gun is the ultimate equalizer and people who’s ya other wise just know one thing you can’t out pitch a pistol and I’m peaking for the guy, and I’m saying he’s could be like Dirty Harry or Indiana Jones a gun is like an extension of his fist

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Shooting defeats the purpose of the oc to improve his character and plus, he's all for knockouts, not ending their lives. Guns and knives are never the answer to solving problems like that and neither is him being a bully

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When the next chapter

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Hopefully soon, but we might add an extra chapter just to keep the pace just right

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Would be a neat spin off to see him solve the matter by different means

How long is the third chapter gonna be?

By the way Genus, what Marshall arts do Griffons had?

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It's actually "Martial" Arts and I think it's taekwondo

Well defended yourself.