Displaced in My Little Mage
He needs to hit Lightning Dust. Or she needs therapy. I'm leaning on the former.
9231884You know what say about revenge. It’s best served cold and unexpected like that ice cream you forgot you had.
stay here the rest of today when we will give you another check up.
"stay here for the rest of the day until we can give you another check up" is how i would suggest rewording this part.
Now the resizable thing to
"reasonable thing" although him mixing up words like he dose is kind of humorous now that I think about it.
aliveat
"alleviate", I had to look the spelling of that one up so take that how you will.
said whale taking a seat on my
"while" not the giant multi-ton animal in the sea.
‘Brief my ass this could be used as an offense weapon in underground librarian pit fights!’
made me laugh, trying to make this not so dry to go over. By that I mean my comments
Having Twili for a sister
Twilight or Twily?
than she deal with by herself.
Could deal with
made sure to saver any moment he could.
savor, English is a horrible language with far too many words that sound the same.
So sense we were already
Since
Lightning Bliss
thought it was Dust not Bliss.
Please continue.
The amount of misspelled words is amazing, I suggest getting the grammarly extension
9297868
The amount of misspelled words is amazing, I suggest getting the grammarly extension.
Fixed that for you.
He needs to hit Lightning Dust. Or she needs therapy. I'm leaning on the former.
9231884
You know what say about revenge. It’s best served cold and unexpected like that ice cream you forgot you had.
"stay here for the rest of the day until we can give you another check up" is how i would suggest rewording this part.
"reasonable thing" although him mixing up words like he dose is kind of humorous now that I think about it.
"alleviate", I had to look the spelling of that one up so take that how you will.
"while" not the giant multi-ton animal in the sea.
made me laugh, trying to make this not so dry to go over. By that I mean my comments
Twilight or Twily?
Could deal with
savor, English is a horrible language with far too many words that sound the same.
Since
thought it was Dust not Bliss.
Please continue.
The amount of misspelled words is amazing, I suggest getting the grammarly extension
9297868
Fixed that for you.