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During the stunt show, Rainbow realizes Scootaloo is growing up, and that Lightning has moved on in her life. Sometimes you make bad choices, and sometimes you make mature ones.

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"How It Should Have Ended" MLP edition.

Feels like a much better moral then the one we got in the show. Good read. Enjoyed it.

A pretty good alternative ending to the episode. It addresses all three parties and gives them each a chance to learn something.

This is one sweet ending and fits nicely. GG well done mateh. :)

JWR
JWR #4 · Oct 6th, 2018 · · 2 ·

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I actually prefer the ending we got, but good story nonetheless.

Do the writers really want Lightning Dust to have learned nothing and forgotten nothing?

JWR
JWR #6 · Oct 12th, 2018 · · 2 ·

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It's her character flaw.

This was a superb piece of writing. I really liked it, start to finish. Nice to see Dash, Scoots and Dust all get their moment here. :twilightsmile:

If this had happened in the episode I wouldn’t be mad.

considering even friends have a right to tell you that you are doing something stupid and dangerous and considering in the show scootaloo almost got hurt. If rainbow hadn't saved her she really could have been hurt.

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I agree. This says if your friends think you are about to something stupid they shouldn't talk you out it.

Good, she realized Scoots is old enough to make her own choices, and not only that, she patched things up with Lightning Dust. Great ending.

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Meh i think its more just anger issues she has
She is Able to learn
Just really struggled with anger

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