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This Is A Sweet Story, I Wish This Was The Actual Way The Episode Ended. Spike Calling Twilight Mom Is By Far The Best Line :twilightsmile:

I liked it. Short and simple.

Very good read. I enjoyed it.:moustache::twilightsmile:

And then once Twilight let Spike fall asleep she went into "Pissed off Mom" mode and ripped Sludge a new one for hurting her son!:twilightangry2:

Twilight walked down the hallway with her face buried in a book. The castle has been very quiet for the past two days. Spike She didnā€™t want so bother Spike after his outburst at her. As she walked down the hallway, she stepped on something soft. Twilight looked down to see a pillow with a heart on it that said ā€˜Number 1 Dadā€™. Twilight looked up to see Spike cleaning out his room.

Superfluous Spike in the third sentence.

This is a nice little story. Short and sweet. Well done.

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I didnā€™t even realize. Thanks I just fixed it.

Short and to the point. I like it.

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