So how many chapters are you expecting because I'm kinda intrigued.

We need more Princess Midnight Sparkle.

Consider this story followed!

My interest is raised I'll follow for a few chapters

...welp thier fucked. And i am going to enjoy angery god Twilight.

Oh damn! Give them hell Midnight Sparkle!

.. Is it wrong that I have the strangest boner for Twilight right now.

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Nope. :3

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Na man we all do

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As many as I can think of.

Intriguing, pace seems a little fast though. Still gonna follow this to see how it plays out.

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Ok. It's not just me then

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Awesome. Cool story. I usually stray away from stories with the death tag cuz the kills are boring and stale. But this. This is good.

Does this story have any sex or sexy moments in it?

Ah, the fix fic. Such creativity. Nobody has ever done this before.

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Ya. Because your not the only one.

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maybe

So what about Teens that didn't do anything against Sunset or what about the Human Celestia and Luna, what will happen to them, one more thing, what about Human Flash Sentry, will Midnight Sparkle try to harm him or what?

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Don’t worry... there are 6 teens who believe of Sunset’s innocence, counting Flash Sentry, and I promise they will be unharmed, but I won’t reveal who the other 5 are.

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Also Midnight is ONLY targeting the students who did physical and emotional harm to Sunset.

But the MAIN targets she’s after are the Rainbooms and especially Anon-A-Miss for doing the most damage.

And she won’t feel any remorse or show any mercy.

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We need proper music for this (highly recommended)

Great opening chapter I'm enjoying this a lot so far.

similar to fallen angels. hopefully, you will keep updating though. i liked fallen angels, but its not updated in some time

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Dude like all the students that did some to sunset are likely going to die painfully. This is so not a fix fic.

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Be honest though. None of those Midnight kills deserves too live at this point.

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Well, this is I where I say adieu.*jumps out the window and makes a run for it*

I sense bad things for my favorite Rainbooms.

I'm more interested now in who Midnight doesnt kill. Principle Celestia and Vice Principle Luna I'd hope would be two that are safe.

I'd like to think Fluttershy, but I can't see it.

That's 2 so far.
Oh, don't mind me. It's just I know there'll be plenty in this story. So, allow me the honor of being this story's body count.

Looks like certain groups of people are about to be “toast”. Both literally and figuratively.

Wow, I didn't think that Princess Twilight would end up as Midnight Sparkle. Me likey. And of course SunLight is the best part of the story. Hell hath no fury for a woman or in this case Alicorn Princess of Friendship turned demonic scorned.

This story is going to be DELIGHTFUL
As for the rest of the story.

I believe this music is proper in my opinion.

I want more chapters to this beautiful story

“You know, I think I’m gonna like the new Twilight... GERONIMO!!!!!” And just like that he ran and jumped right into the pile of rubies, and began chowing down.

Me two young drake me too but for a completely different reason and that reason is GOREY VIOLENCE!

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Well thank you.

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fair point

*sees picture*

Consider myself lucky that there were no blood from the news.

Me: *Sees Twilight on a killing spree* Whelp, time to play this music.

*Computer loading to Battlefield 1 OST: The Runner*

Me: You can run, but you can't hide from the wrath of Twilight, CHS students!

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While parts of this felt a bit rushed, it was still a lot of fun to read and I can't wait to see where to read more. While I suspect you won't confirm or deny anything, my first thought after reading your comment was to hope the other five would be Octavia and Vinyl, Lyra and Bonbon, and Trixie, though looking at it logically I would think that after working for her for so long Snips and Snails would know her methods well enough to know she's not Anon-I-Miss. Then again, their not all that bright so I guess theirs some hope their not taking up two of the six seats on this little lifeboat. As for Flash, I'm not sure I'm buying your assurance of his safety, while Midnight might not kill him for hurting Sunset, the way she says "My Sunset" suggest she has something of a possessive streak and Flash is her ex, I can see her sparing him because he believed in Sunset and then latter ripping his throat out in a fit of jealousy when he or Sunset say something to remind her they once dated.

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two of them are Snips and Snails, aren't they?

also were you inspired by Solar Eclipse?

not accusing you of ripping it off

well a certain coward is screwed

You have my attention... R.I.P. to everyone that is about to die...

As the now deceased cell once said"At first you had my curiosity, but now you have my erection"

You know, with how often Canterlot High gets fucked by writers, they'd take it out to dinner and a movie first lol

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No Midnight Sparkle is actually a real thing, look up the Friendship Games

Once again, you sir have my attention! Can’t wait to see how this story plays out!

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I meant the story

I know who Midnight Sparkle is

Not a fan of Discord Tia ship but will still read on

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Well to answer your question, I always liked how Twilight gets really angry, but her punishments to the Rainbooms and the CHS students are... too light.

So I came up with this story where her anger goes waaaayyy too far.

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But are you a fan of SunLight

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I see

also you didn't answer my first question about Snips and Snails