-UNDERGOING EXTENSIVE REWRITES!-
Update: As of March 4, 2021, all the original chapters have been taken down.
The stories of the Kamen Riders have become legendary all over the world, and even the universe. At one point, a whole world populated by descendants of Riders was formed, but has been destroyed by evil forces. The Rider Powers have been sealed into watches, and scattered to a far away world.
When Tom Decade, the last survivor of the Rider World and a descendant of Kamen Rider Decade, lands in Equestria, he is soon thrust into an adventure to retrieve all the RideWatches and keep his new home safe. But things aren't always as they seem, as multiple forces conspire to lead the young Rider to a ghastly fate...
Chapters (21)
Honestly, the pacing is a LOT better this time around, though I still have a few problems. It's not just FIMfic's formatting being a bitch, this story's paragraph spacing is at times horrendous and honestly you could use a proofreader. Plus, as I said over Discord, this really should be a new story instead of you just tacking this on to the old chapters, more professional.
But, shouldn't a descendant of Kamen Rider Decade have a Japanese name or at least have a last name that isn't "Decade"?
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I'm gonna go into detail about that soon enough, but just like in the first version of the story, anyone from the world Tom is from that's descended from a Rider takes the Rider's name as their family name.
Ex. if someone were sired by Yusuke Godai, their last name would be Kuuga, and so on
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Awesome
You got my vote cheif. Cant wait to see where you got from here.
CJ: Aw shit, here we go again
dude i gotta say i am a huge fan of kamen rider after watching build end and getting straight into zi o, i was hooked and something true about me is, i never read a book.....
so yea this one here dude you are killing me with this story, so just wanna say this
WHERE IS MY BANJOU??!?!?!!!?
(JK XD like the story can't wait to see what else you come up!)
Interested on what will happen down the line in the rewrite there.
Hope Spike doesn't miss out on this there and such.
Okay, yeah, I have to admit the fight scenes are better. With a bit of practice, you can probably do 2,000 word ones.
Though I would still recommend reorganizing the chapters, put the rewritten ones first. Ahead of the old story.
The fight scenes looks improved honestly.
Still curious on whats in store for characters like Spike and Princess Luna there for sure.
Where's the old versions of the chapters btw?
I think Spike gotten to see the Another Build fight in the original version, did he?
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All the old version are still here, they're marked as (old)
I know where this is going.
Nice Chapter, Woz. I know where this is going in the next one and we know the rest for the future chapters as well.
Okay, yeah this was good. I would still want you to do some paragraph spacing but honestly, the tension here was actually pretty good. Like, it felt like there were *actual stakes.*
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You mean the part that some pony we know don't trust Tom just because he's a human?
The fight was pretty good to see.
Liked Spike's interest in hearing about the Kamen Riders there too.
Too bad he didn't get to see Another Build unlike in the original version iirc..
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You did give me the idea to add more Spike relevance in.
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More like the Another Riders are getting cleverer, using civilans to shield themselves and cause chaos.
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Those cowards. They are nothing but disgraced to the name Kamen Rider.
I am glad that this story is continuing
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I wonder if I caused other ideas to form too?
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Like for the next chapter?
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Like for the fic in general there.
...That ending, like uh that's legitimately scary. Imagine someone using the visage of your best friend against you, worming their way into your trust and... oh wait, you don't have to imagine.
(Side note, there are some paragraph spacing errors I would go back and fix. FIMfic's formatting is a bitch, I know.)
Nice to see a new chapter.
The ending was pretty suspenseful.
I happen to be watching Kamen Rider Kiva lately as well.
Though disappointed Spike missed out on this due to another case of "Spike gotta stay behind to watch over something"(the cause being his crush on Rarity froze him up).
I find it really bugs me a bunch he missed out on with Another Build and Another Kiva especially due to they were two of his friends turned into Another Riders there.
Also, Rarity can get scary. And you don't like it when she's mad. Also, I'm gonna get where this is going and chapter after that.
I can't tell from the cover if Pinkie's wearing a mask or she got gagged by someone
This got a chuckle out of me.
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She's wearing a mask, it's a reference to how Wataru acted in Kamen Rider Kiva.
Nice picture where did you get it
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Oooooh I see
Wow... Excellent ending!
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Hope Tom saved Fluttershy in the next chapter.
Ooooooooh boy, that ending. Like... Like... *finds an Apple Bloom plushie to cuddle and protect*
Also, was so jamming along to Break the Chain once Tom got the Kiva watch.
Really liked the bit of seeing Princess Luna right there.
And really cool in seeing Spike did some stuff like burning the swarm and using his dragonfire to deliver the Kiva Ridewatch.
Hope we what more stuff he will do.
So Another Gaim is up next with Applebloom being its bearer?
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You're right on the Another Gaim part, but it's not Apple Bloom. That's all I'm going to say on the matter.
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Well that was unexpected in the end. I thought Majin Double will make its appearance after possessing AJ, but I didn’t know that Majin Gaim will be in the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Ok. I haven't read much Kamen Rider fanfics or know much about it in general. But I like this... Also BEST MATCH!!!
You know, that latest chapter made me wonder something. Well luna and tom has some sort of dynamic sence oma zi-o in a way is like zi-o nightmare moon. It honestly would be an interesting direction for the story to take.
Oh man I hope I get to see more of this story soon
Okay, yep, I *really* hate Bug Bitch. Like... ooooooh dear. Just... everything about this chapter.
So Another Gaim and Another Baron were Applejack's dead parents?
Even the dead isn't safe from turning into Another Riders it seems.
Really disappointing this is another case of "Spike misses out hard due to the girls making him stay behind to watch something.. AGAIN"..
It bothered me so much when it happened in the show alot..
it bums me out that he missed out on the fight with Another Gaim/Baron and missing out on seeing Kamen Rider Geiz's debut there due to that.
Doesn't help that it was essentially pointless in making Spike stay behind since nothing tried to come out of the portal or anything happened..
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In this case, Spike staying behind was justified- they were going into one of the most dangerous places in KR history.
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The thing is, nothing DID tried to come out.
So Spike staying behind was basically pointless since nothing happened, which makes it hurt worse.
In fact why not have Big Mac watch it instead? It just really bothers me Spike missed out on Geiz's debut all due to this is another case of "The girls made Spike stay behind to watch something and he misses out hard due to it". That problem happened too much in the show, a major example is Rainbow Road trip where he was forced to miss out on the special trip due to they made him watch the school(even though that's STARLIGHT'S job).
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This is a pretty interesting chapter there.
You demonstrated quite good on what Another W can do with making use of its other Memories and such.
Only thing missing was it going "Now.. count up your sins!".
I liked the bit about Spike wishing he could do more and how he delivered the Gaim Watch there.
I wonder what else is in store?
That bit about Fluttershy referencing that meme was hilarious.
Though was Spike included in getting to slash at Another W too? It doesn't seem to make sense to have him excluded like that.
In fact he kind of disappeared after he delivered the Gaim Watch
Geez Twi, tell us how you really feel!
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Sorry, this one was my fault. He did help with the finisher, I just sorta maybe forgot to say it?
Why do I get a feeling that Chrysalis has either the Ryuki or Wizard Watch? Also, Ouja/Strike is purple, not blue.
And why do I get a feeling that when she say dragon fire, it's a foreshadow in the next chapter? Hope Twilight didn't get turned into Another Rider like I don't know...Another Wizard since he can use magic.