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Sequel where everyone learns the truth please.
Traitor is as traitor does. Monster is as monster does. The ends do not justify the means.
Twilight needs a cell right next to Tirek.
Wouldn't mind a sequel to this
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Considering how mentally unstable Twilight has been during the entire show, I could easily see her becoming like this normally.
Letters to the spirit? What kind of spirit? The Spirit in the Sky?
Really would like to see an end to this story. I don't see Discord taking this laying down.
So let me get this straight. Discord: an immortal spirit so powerful it took the Elements of Harmony to actually stop him. With a single literal snap of his talons, could eternally make Twilight's existence a living hell. Turning her white cells into acid but making it to where she'll never die or lock her in her own mind as she watches her body bring chaos to the lands as a sick joke. "you love harmony? Well watch with a smile on your physical face as that, and everything else you've worked for, is destroyed by your own hooves."
Twilight: A 'genius' Alicorn who is well aware of what Discord is capable of. She destroyed the only link that stopped Discord from going full villain by destroying Discord's friendship with Fluttershy. Twilight can't have the Elements with her 24/7 because the tree will die and the other mortal bearers with eventually die. So now we have a lethal spirit of chaos on the loose, and Twilight only has till one of the bearers die, to think of a solution against a master trickster, who is pissed and out for blood with no one able to calm him down.
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well to be honest, she isn't only targeting specifically him. but instead targeting what she sees as not part of her process to build a "kingdom of harmony", while simultaneously destroying what she deemed unfit in her "kingdom". of course, in her mind, chaos fits nowhere in a "kingdom of harmony". there's more sequels to this btw, telling a more in depth story, per say.
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Oh, thanks for letting me know.
Hello! I really like this AU you've made! So, I was just re-reading some parts of it, and I came across some errors. Nothing major, just some basic typos
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oof! thanks,, man! guess i gotta spell check more often haha
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I'm happy to help. If you toss your fics into a Google Doc before posting, it'll catch a lot of errors automatically. It's probably more accurate than FimFic's error detection
I was confused the first half, but I’m a little bit upset about the second half, this man had the chance to tell his story but he didn’t. Also, the fact he didn’t fight back shows how good of a friend he is.
You can has review!