(Takes place after "The Road to Friendship". Proofread by Smity91 on Fanfiction.net.)
Starlight and Trixie have just gotten back from a very brief roadtrip to Saddle Arabia that didn't pan out. The trip may have been a bust, but their friendship still stands.
However, the two unicorns soon find themselves confronting an unexpected visitor, Starlight's father, Firelight. He's come to Ponyville to see his daughter, largely because she hasn't visited him in months.
For Trixie, this is the first time the magician has ever encountered any family of Starlight's. But Starlight worries that her father might unintentionally embarrass her in front of her friend. Are her fears justified?
And what will Trixie think of her best friend's father's... unusual behavior?
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daddy issue
I like this !
I really like this. I especially like Firelight opening up about his own part in Starlight's issues. This line in particular
That provided some great insight, into a character I never really liked before or thought was really handled well.
Solid work. Have a fav and an upvote. ^_^
News about Spike's age.
That was a great read.
9207222 I knew you'd like it. There aren't nearly enough fics involving Firelight since his debut.
9207231
Yeah.
There are only 9 right now, including this one.
That number should be much higher.
9207235 I'm surprised there's been so little content for him even in NSFW, I was expecting some clop since for whatever reason that's almost always what people do with new characters and new episode material.
9207318
Oh, there's definitely at least one clopfic that exists.
I guess Firelight just hasn't resonated with the fanfic side of the community the same way other (so far) one-offs have had.
9207459 I guess not, but apparently he was popular enough to get his own tag.
9207469
I think it's more to do with new policies for the site as a whole rather than his popularity, but I'm not sure.
I finally managed to read this and I liked it very much.
Hilarious Discord cameo
This was a fun read; nice to see Trixie meeting Starlight's dad and put on a small show for him. I'd like to read something about Trixie's family with Jack Pot; you had a good handle on this story, seems like a good lead in for a follow up story to this one. Keep going with this.
Cute story of a meeting that'd be great to see, I'll give a follow in the hopes for that sequel.