Quenchless Fire

Sunset: devotee of fire, mage of the flame. Sea Swirl: water shaman, mage of the sea. Neither seems to be a good fit for the other, yet time has forged their bond unbreakable. However, once they both journey into the deep…

Written for the Sunset Shimmer Shipping Contest: Journeys.

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FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #1 · Sep 13th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Beautiful. I love the elementally appropriate imagery and the slow rollback to reveal just how Sunset fell from grace in this world. This was, suitably enough, a very deeply touching story. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the judging.

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PresentPerfect #2 · Dec 2nd, 2018 · 1 · ·

Forget the seaponies, call upon some fuckin' dolphins when you're in need! :D

It makes me feel good to know that you can do Sunset's story in a completely different setting.

Impossible Numbers

Impossible Numbers #3 · Feb 24th, 2019 · · ·

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FanOfMostEverything
Gosh, thanks for such a neat comment! That fundamental elemental contrast - and the resultant imagery - were pretty much how I got this idea in the first place ("Hm, let's say Sunset's fire, so who would represent water...?"). As for "deeply touching", this is exactly the sort of response I was hoping for. Thanks again!