This story is a sequel to Dawn of the ERS
What started as an anniversary for Twilight's parents, becomes an interesting ordeal to get Twilight back to her alicorn form, when Flurry Heart inadvertently causes her to lose the abilities.
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Robert Emerald Fountain
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Robert Emerald Fountain
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Upvote denied. Not for the idea. It's the fact that this all could have been done in one chapter. People have said it before. Now I'm saying it.
Why do you not like it?
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It suffers from what all your stories have. You're making us read more chapters than are needed. All this can be done in one chapter.
I know people have said it before. These would do so much better if you did. The ideas thenselves aren't necessarily bad.
But the execution is.
That's your opinion, and I have my own.
Besides, I prefer to spilt my stories into sections. Otherwise, I would be writing a brief summary, without every detail. I would rather designate chapters to different parts.