When Greg Hassels get blinded from an accident he gets depressed. On Christmas eve he makes a wish and he wakes up in Equestria.
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I like it!
it doesnt seem too tragic until now, and that is good for me ^^
Maybe try writing longer chapters, clean it up a little, ect. ect.
Ahhhh.... this is a marty stu story. damn I was hoping for better.
whats a marty stu story ?
So, uh
I think you probably meant 'adept in magic' (or, perhaps, 'adept at magic'), rather than 'inept in magic'
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woops
the title reminds me of a book
"I have no mouth and I must scream"
ever read it?
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I cant say I have
Why are the chapters so dang short?
Holy crap...
The first chapter is... sad...
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Marty Stu
but i dont really see how that apllies
uhhhh.... I like this and everything but...
applejack a good poker player?
seriously?
the worst liar of the world a good poker player?
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Applejacks also rational and thinks things through and even though shes a bad liar, Gregs worse
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point taken ^^
Good job so far with the chapters. The only gripe i have is the lenght of the chapters, but that is a small thing to be concerned about.
The constructive criticizer in me says, "Nice plot development and good use of punctuation."
The human in me says, "Damn, tough break."
The brony inside of me says, "Rainbow Dash is best pony."
Rainbow Dash.... you have the greatest ability to misunderstand a situation... and now my urge to kill you has increased by 22%.
Is it just me or is the text 'pushing' very fast?
it could be applebloom/big mac>>97581
And then he's blind again -_-
Probably not though...
yes because Applebloom can totally knock him out
Oho! I thought this was dead! I think this was the first HiE fic I read on this site, good to see that it isn't dead.
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sorry school holidays family and a massive case of writers block
Awww such a sweet chapter :). I cant wait for the next one.
MAIGAWDWALLOFTEXTAPELLINGGWAAAAAH
"It seemed to be an anonymous decision by all, it had been a tiring day for all of them. After the goodbyes had been said and everyone had left the barn to receed into their own homes. As Twilight and Greg had arrived to the tree that they called home Twilight had seemed to be anxious for some reason. Greg then decided to act on this observation."
might you mean "unanimous"?