The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.
Sunset, ashamed of her relationship with Adagio, tries to hide it from her friends. Adagio then gives her an ultimatum: Tell them or she will. Join them as they try to navigate through the tricky journey of redemption, love, forgiveness, and who tops.
An entry into Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest: Journeys . rated T for mild humor/implied sex.
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Ah good, a little dose of Sundaigo is always good here and there even when you're a fan of Sunlight such as myself.
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i made a few edits. 
thank you!
Every other SunDagio entry to the shipping contest has put some twist on it, some new angle that makes it worth telling. Whereas this is the same 'Adagio is seductive and Sunset is uncomfortable about what her friends will think' we've been seeing since 2014.
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*shrugs* well i mean, i havent read a single sundagio story like that so i wouldnt have known.
I can imagine the Rainbooms walking in one of Sunset and Adagio's relentless love making sessions.
Sorry, this fell pretty flat for me.
I liked a few of Adagio's lines, and I appreciated how impatient she was with Sunset fretting over what to tell her friends and stuff. But I think that kinda got taken too far, because throughout the whole story I was honestly just wondering why Adagio even bothered dating Sunset. They had a bit of nice banter, I guess, it just didn't feel like Adagio had much reason to put up with Sunset's situation for as long as she apparently did. She made that speech at the end about why she loved Sunset, I guess, but that just didn't feel believable after the rest of the story.
Beyond that, there just, eh, wasn't much of substance here? The long description pretty much gave away the whole plotline--throw in a "But everything works out in the end" and you'd have summarized the whole story.
So, uh, yeah. As far as SunDagio fics go, this one didn't really do it for me.
Was alright. Your writing style is a little weird though, I couldn't get into it as much.
Eh, not terrible, not great either. Pacing was kinda weird and some lines kinda came out of nowhere. 5/10 I guess
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Okay.
9160943
What does that mean?
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I dunno my dude. I was even hesitant to make the comment because I don't know how to put my thoughts into words.
It's like... Some parts were really vague and it kinda seemed rushed. I dunno, ignore me I guess, it's not that big of a deal. Your story was good, I just didn't think it was great.
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ah okay. I was just curious
Sunset "Actually I told them a couple of days ago and while it was rough for a little bit, things worked out in the end.
Sunset "NO. Sorry Twilight, but I don't want to be in the same dimension when Shining Armor and Cadance find out about your chitinous marefriend.
Always glad to get to read a new SunDagio, though I felt really bad for Adagio for almost the entire story.
I swear Adagio is always perfect for Sunset
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poor twilight!
Pfft!
Hm.
I said that I loved it (as every story you release - plus I hope people notice how much you work here), but now I hope to see it placed.
You deserve it.
The heck kinda movies they letting high school students see? c.c
God damn it adagio.
I hope she remembers to return it to sunset. 😒
Your so gonna regret you did that sunset.
And that's why I hardly/rarely lie to the ones I care about or this happens.
Since when did she wear reading glasses?
Me neither.
Seriously, just seriously adagio!?!?