Based in RuinQueenofOblivion's adapted and expanded universe for Fallout: Equestria, as created and written by Kkat.
212 years after the bombs fell and the world of Equestria was plunged into in darkness, A synthetic replica of a pre-war pony leaves her home bunker and loving father and robotic mother behind in search of the fate of her namesake and all that remains of her lineage.
However, she soon discovers that her journey may not be as simple as perceived, and she must rely on her new found friends, for both survival and to ensure her mission is a success. What mysteries will she uncover? What stories will she piece together? Only time will tell what the future holds for her in this strange world.
Cover Art by Aurora Fang
Chapters (10)
Uhh... A fanfic of a fanfic of a fanfic?
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Well, I'm RuinQueenofOblivion's co-writer, and I've contributed to several of her fics through writing characters and contributing world building ideas. So, on my first solo fic I decided to stay in her universe because it's what I know and what I helped build. It's not really a fanfic of a fanfic of a fanfic, it's more or less a Fanfic of the original fallout Equestria, set in the same universe as another set of Fanfics of the original Fallout Equestria, it's complicated.
I myself am one of those people that only read human in equestria fics but this is rather good
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Thank you! That actually means a whole lot to me. I don't have a heck of a lot of confidence when it comes to writing, and I honestly never thought I would ever actually post anything.
*Thumbs up* Love it.
Fallout:Equestria universe is made by Kkat. You should probably rephrase your introduction as, for example "Based in RuinQueenofOblivion's alternative reality of Fallout:Equestria universe, made by Kkat"
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There, is that better? I didn't even think about giving any sort of credit for Kkat which was very short sighted of me.
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Much better, thank you.
Okay, interesting so far, and I swore that little speech the Overmare gave ending with not to eat pears was a Doctor Who ref.
So, that's when this takes place, a year after Survivor's Guilt. Huh. Glad to have that little piece of info. Keep up the good work.
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It was, Rach said how the whole scene reminded her of a scene from doctor who, and jokingly said 'and don't eat any pears!' and I decided to work it into it.
*Thumbs up* Also I loved writing one of the pilots for ya.
Loving these more and more bits of info we're getting about the post SG world, and the scenes with Spectra were the icing on the cake. (BTW, love the gorgeous new cover art)
Alright, first chapter! I think it's a good start! 'Sweetie Bot' always intrigued me, it wouldn't work in the original universe, but in the Fallout Equestria universe it works perfectly! It reminds me of the synths in Fallout 4! Unique and the father sound like good characters, the fathers drive to finish his little project is sound. He put Rarity's memories, or as many as he has, into Unique, again, very interesting and logical thing to do. He wants another chance to be a father. Sadly, he doesn't get that chance. Sweetie Belle gets the task of searching for any information of her original pony or her mother. The quest is set, and a good one at that!
Having Rarity be Sweetie Belle's mother opens interesting ideas. Like, who exactly is the father? Someone we know from the original universe? Who knows, I hope we find out at some point!
Honestly, the story has a solid foundation. Characters have been established, and I see from the cover art that a few more are to be introduced! I can't wait to read more so I'm going to read the other chapters now!
Hmm! Interesting! Nightshade sounds like a dick! No one touches Midas! She's a sweetie pie! I like how Sweetie Belle is still good, she thinks the best of the world. I wonder how the actual world is going to affect her. Also, those canons! Wow! So much firepower! That's going to attract a lot of attention! I'm already scared for Sweetie if she gets hurt... :< Gonna read the rest soon!
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Oh very nice chapter.
Nice work, and yeah I know that feeling when you breach the double-digit word count with a single chapter. Not something you can really describe or put into words, really.
*Thumbs up* Love it very nice chapter and I loved how you brought Sugar Belle in.
Now, wonder would have happened had Sugar known about the events taking place pre-Project Horizons between Twilight and Mac? Also, this, I just love this.
Autumn would do well as a female Sherlock Hooves with observation skills like that.
Oh, Sweetie... hugs
Good chapter, good chapter.
Well, I'll be damned. Sunburst of all ponies. Never saw that coming. And Sweetie... More of a mystery to ponder. I wonder, does she have the original's soul?
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recursive fanfiction, its the term for any work set in an already existing fanfic universe, thus 'any' fanfic written about FoE regardless of degrees of separation is a recursive fanfic
i havnt goten around to reading survivors guilt myself yet, i tend to prefer the PH expanded universe seting and it already has a sweetie bot, a somewhat manic one i might add
then again shes a robot so i dont see how there couldnt be more then one
and of course anyone who knows the original story will know this tale will end, where it all began, the final resting place of sweetie bell
stable 2
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Funny joke, and I have to say personally - You're wrong. (as Stable 2 has been repurposed in this universe, as you would know if you read RuinQueenofOblivion's Fanfiction - Survivor's Guilt.)
That'd be too easy anyway.
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so much for the comment on survivors guilt that there was just 'one little thing' changed
no stable 2 means no little pip, no little pip means no day of sunshine and rainbows...thats not a little retcon, thats a full rewrite
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Where'd you get that from? The original story for Survivor's guilt did none of those things. In fact I believe in one chapter they even visited LittlePip in the SPP Hub
9372800 Okay, I think you misunderstood what was meant. Stable Two is still there, nothing about what happened in the original fic is changed at all. Stable Two, and Sweet Apple Acres in general, was repurposed at the end of the story, years after it had been abandoned after the events of the original story. Littlepip is still there, but since it was abandoned it was repurposed into a new settlement and nothing more, that's all.
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okay that being the case then it would 'still' be sweetie bots last stop, cause rebuilt or not its where sweetie belle spent her last days and where she died, she might have to go other places to get her answers but in the end, it still is the originals final resting place, and the survivors that eventualy came to live in the NCR [and littlepip herself] are her legacy, as much as they are applejacks.
and as to where i got it from as ruinqueen stated i missunderstood what you were saying, i thought you meant it was repurposed 'before' the events of the great war as in sweetie belle never became its overmare
now we just need somebody to write a story about an apple bloom clone showing up and the trio will all get there second chances...or is that in one of these two alreadY?
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In a way yes, in Survivor's guilt there is something along those lines, but not quite. Also, I think you fail to understand that Sweetie Belle (Mine, the bot) is searching for answers, not for the final resting place of the original, and while there is intentions for her to visit Crusader town ( The town that is being constructed in Sweet Apple Acres outside of Stable 2 ) - I can say this much, that it is far from the final place that she's going to visit.
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interesting....*glances at FoE: the chrysalis which hes currently reading then back to survivors guilt* hmmm....on the one hand you have me curious now, on the other hand changelings are kinda my favorite MLP race....[with it being a tossup between integration and hive alive for my favorite changeling related stories]
Oh, Cricket... salutes
Well worth the wait.
A very good start. Looking forward to seeing the rest of the story.
Love the dream sequence. More than a heart beat, she felt her own fur. A subtle, yet important detail. Really enjoying this as well as the characters interaction with each other.
Wow, that final scene choked me up. I do not think I will ever hear crickets the same again
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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What do you mean? Just Sweetie, Midas, Alabaster, and Autumn?
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All of them. And I'd like specific voice actors.
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I, wouldn't really have much of a choice on that matter, I have an idea of how I think they sound in my head but there is no guarantee I can even find a VA that would match them any.
Really, all I could suggest, is use your own imagination based on their personalities?
Bot a bad chapter, life happens, so take the time you need to write your stories. I look forward to the next one when you get it ready.
would sweetie bot be a high target for the synth corporation especially if she pre-war sweetie synth if not I'm sure they'd want her back if she's been missing since pre-war?
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She is an independent post war production and has no affiliation with any corporation or faction either pre or post wasteland.
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awe well that's less fun
I don't really expect much from this story, however I find the Sweetie Bot character interesting.
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I don't really know where I am going with this anymore either so I don't know what to expect either.