Have you ever wondered what would happen if you add one being to the very beginning of a Story? No? Well, I hope you do now while you read this story about one cute 'little' Fox who will turn History upside down for the better or, the worse.
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When you have time, go thru the chapter 1 more time and fix the errors (there are a lot of small misses). Other than that a nice chapter, good content driving the story forward. Lets hope Celestia and Luna are not ignorant children that make a possible bad situation worse.
Yey for new chapters! Also, if you need small fixes, I'd be more than willing to help you correct them!
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Thanks, that would be nice. Could you maybe pm me and write which Chapter the error was, the the paragraphs with the error and just marker the error in red (or if you have time, maybe explain the error so I maybe won't do them again?)
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Aww, thanks
great chapter i hope to see more soon
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Thanks and there will be plenty more Chapters in the future.
Fond a typo. Try “shaking” instead of shocking
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Thanks for the notification. I dealt with the error.