Have you ever wondered what would happen if you add one being to the very beginning of a Story? No? Well, I hope you do now while you read this story about one cute 'little' Fox who will turn History upside down for the better or, the worse.
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Your summary wasn't very encouraging.
This ... is .... AMAZING
U did a great job making these few chaptures u made, hope u make more.
9138939
Thanks pal, I am happy that you liked it , and I hope you will like the future ones too
hey buddy just a friendly tip you should add more to the description the more thrilling it sounds the readers you will get and this description is a bit short
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good luck
(again this is just some friendly critique)
9139311
I am always open for constructive advice.
9139567
ok good
my only issue is claiming that spreading order could create life, life is chaos bound by the smallest amount of order in harmony. pure order has no change and no life. pure chaos has no constants
9142977
I, or in this case Auriel never claimed that it was order which created life. Auriel just tried to explain it with what she liked and already knew in her vocabulary since Chaos was an unkown element for her. From what we read so far you could see that she often said blue, brown or purple Spell because of how little 'real order' she understood. But you have spotted an important detail, pure chaos and pure Order can't bring life, but already a slight amount of either of them, in ths case Order, is already enough to stop Auriel from creating sentient life.
9138834
and yet you didn't even give the chance to read it and instead your judging it just by the desc
not cool man
9144693
Tell me what the purpose of a summary is. I'll wait.
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sum·ma·ry
[ˈsəmərē]
NOUN
summaries (plural noun)
"a summary of Chapter Three"
synonyms: synopsis · precis · résumé · abstract · abridgment · digest · compendium · condensation · encapsulation · abbreviated version · outline · sketch · rundown · review · summing-up · survey · overview · run-through · notes · recapitulation · recap · tour d'horizon · wrap-up · epitome · conspectus · summa
ADJECTIVE
"summary financial statements"
synonyms: abridged · abbreviated · shortened · condensed · concise · succinct · thumbnail · compact · terse · short · compressed · cursory · compendious · synoptic · brief · crisp · pithy · to the point
antonyms: lengthy · in full
law
(of a judicial process) conducted without the customary legal formalities.
"summary arrest"
synonyms: immediate · instant · instantaneous · on-the-spot · direct · forthwith · prompt · speedy · swift · rapid · expeditious · without delay · without hesitation · sudden · hasty · abrupt · arbitrary · without formality · without notice · without warning · peremptory · without discussion
antonyms: dilatory · slow
9145010
So you copy and pasted the definition. Now that you (hopefully) know the purpose of the summary, do you see why your first comment sounds dumb?
9145444
Dear Damn Hamster, I initially didn't want to write this comment, but seeing how you are passively insulting my Readers, forced me to do this.
1. The big text under the title of the Story is no summary, nor is it in any Fanfiction on this site. What you are talking about is a description. A Description is something that is supposed to give you a small idea of what this Story will be about, what you can expect, and what things definitely won't happen, a summary is telling you what and when something will happen in a Story which is precisely the opposite of what a Story suppose to do. By accusing one of my readers of not knowing what a summary is, even though you apparently don't know it yourself, you embarrassed yourself.
2. You openly accused one of my readers, and his words, being stupid and even questioned his basic knowldge and his capability to learn by adding a '(hopefully),' but you, like mentioned in the previous point, made yourself look bad.
3. You told me that my 'summary' wasn't very encouraging, that was a normal and constructive comment... if you would have at least told me what was exactly was bad and how to improve, the comment in this state only means 'Your 'summary' is bad.'
4. I know a small bit about your behavior on this site and it's pretty obvious that you wouldn't just 'attack' something so little as a description while leaving the whole Story alone unless you didn't even read it.
5. I am going to be as blunt for this as I can be and I will give you the truth no matter how much it hurts, which probably won't even be bothering you considering I am just a random guy on the internet, like you. I despise you to the bottom of my being, and I hate Bullies of all kinds. You have already insulted so many new writers that it already disgusts me, even though I have never had received nor wrote anything to you. What do you expect from a new writer? I don't even want to hear your answer, so I am going to say it myself, all of them are bad in the beginning and you won't write a good Story on your first attempt, I know that as a guy who wrote the worst crap in the beginning and had to rewrite everything several times. So I am going to get right on the point, I don't want ever hear from you again, goodbye, Damn Hamster or as you were previously known, Hamster_Master.
9145740
You miss/sir have earned my respect. Along with a good laugh.