Have you ever wondered what would happen if you add one being to the very beginning of a Story? No? Well, I hope you do now while you read this story about one cute 'little' Fox who will turn History upside down for the better or, the worse.
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Th is story is what authors should aspire to write in terms of quality and world building. Great job sir and may you continue to write your stories and tomes in piece.
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I am thankful and flattered that you feel this way about this Story and I hope that many other Readers see this fanfiction the same way. Also, thanks for the nice comment, it made my day
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your thanks is noted and welcome good sir. i just can't wait for the next update in this work of literature. keep up the good work.
~ frost, the bat of shadows and crystal
It was good so far keep it up
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Thanks the next Chapter is already at 6k words.
That's awesome and I NEED MOAR CUTE. I DEMAND IT.
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It's quiet funny how you changed from: "I shall read it " to: "GIVE ME MOAR!!!! "
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Yeah talk about personality flip XD. Also sorry for the triple comment. They are all in different chapters.
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I am always happy about comments, so do not hesitate. As long as it isn't an insult, but just something polite or constructive criticism, shout it out, I would be honored to have someone judge my work. Oh, and the next Chapter will come out tomorrow, maybe even today.
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My reaction
Crysalis moaned silently while consuming the apple as if she hasn't anything in a thousand years.
Dont you men Auriel?
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nope. The Chrysalis moaned as if she hadn't eaten something this good in a thousand years.
Sorry if I read wrong again but aren’t you missing a “kindly” in this sentence?
Ups kindness
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There is no need to apologies. Mistakes happen and constructive criticism is always welcome. Please let me know if you find any more errors during your reading experience and your opinion on this story would interest me aswell, if you don't mind that is.
Re-reading ‘tis story and fond this. Is it supposed to say The sand in a vast radius glowed with a blue and blue light. and not blue and green light?
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Am I the first that feels weird reading this sentence?
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Nope. While the author tries. These chapters so far need a second pair of eyes to edit it. Hopefully they have found an editor by now.