I applaud the conversation in this chapter. The discussion between Featherweight and Thunderlane was incredibly interesting. It gave me the same feeling as reading a well done action scene. I could feel a bit of the older Featherweight coming out in the interaction. The inherent unreliability of a narrator recalling events came through with how oddly well thought out Featherweight's responses were. I like to imagine his true responses were much less eloquent but just as disarming.
This chapter made me extremely uncomfortable but i suppose that's the point. I really hope Feather is able to recover because he's massively unstable right now. Everything is just horrible horrible horrible.
10059523 10059524 I'm not sure I see the point of the Wiki reference, but for the other one: I think linking to material which violates Fimfiction's ToS isn't allowed, so you need to remove the Nifty link. You can say something like "search for this story" but a website URL is not permitted.
In the story, castration (according to society) is not effective at preventing violence once maturation has taken root. Supposedly, several months of high testosterone exposure makes the changes to one's mental state "permanent", which is why they need to geld a colt as soon as possible after he hits puberty. So DuMond would not be a good counterexample to that society's common viewpoint.
its back and its taking it in a direction I'm not sure I want to follow.
On the other hand I'm in too deep, I've read every other chapter and need to know how this ends.
Along with Luna's take on everything as she seems to be more chill and against gelding than twilight who seems to be for gelding.
In any of that g kind of thing happens, untracking.
I applaud the conversation in this chapter. The discussion between Featherweight and Thunderlane was incredibly interesting. It gave me the same feeling as reading a well done action scene. I could feel a bit of the older Featherweight coming out in the interaction. The inherent unreliability of a narrator recalling events came through with how oddly well thought out Featherweight's responses were. I like to imagine his true responses were much less eloquent but just as disarming.
this chapter was really captivating, really interesting development and giving any Clous.
the entire conversation with thunder makes it more that obvious how messed up poor feather is from the experience.
i wonder what happens next, ceep it up ^^
This chapter made me extremely uncomfortable but i suppose that's the point. I really hope Feather is able to recover because he's massively unstable right now. Everything is just horrible horrible horrible.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wayne_DuMond
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I'm not sure I see the point of the Wiki reference, but for the other one: I think linking to material which violates Fimfiction's ToS isn't allowed, so you need to remove the Nifty link. You can say something like "search for this story" but a website URL is not permitted.
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Just to be safe, I need to delete this now since you haven't removed the link. I don't want you to get in trouble.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wayne_DuMond
Damn missed the update, loved it, I wonder how this could grow between them now in secret
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Oh! I get it now.
In the story, castration (according to society) is not effective at preventing violence once maturation has taken root. Supposedly, several months of high testosterone exposure makes the changes to one's mental state "permanent", which is why they need to geld a colt as soon as possible after he hits puberty. So DuMond would not be a good counterexample to that society's common viewpoint.