Relatively new to the fanfic game. I have a few stories in the works that I'll be updating as regularly as possible. On a completely separate yet completely necessary note, LUNA IS BEST PONY!
Taking place 15 years before the events of Final Fantasy VII: Crisis Core, a group of 5 ordinary ponies are transformed into the prototype super-soldiers in an elite military force known as SOLDIER against their will. Now they must fight for Shinra in order to save themselves.
In their travels, unexpected occurrences take place. Forever changing not only their lives, but the very world itself.
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Interesting.
As a DND player, pegasister, and FF7 fan, I am astounded that you kept the feel of Final Fantasy so far both in writing this and playing it.
....woah, was not expecting that.
And you say this was a D&D campaign? I would have loved to be there, I bet. xD
Great! I'm tracking, this has rooted my interest!
Ciao!!
I'm... Not sure what to say... I was expecting more... IDK... CROSSOVER? I mean, right now, all you're doing is borrowing the FFVII world, not the characters or anything aside from the villains. (At least so far, anyhoof.) So... I'm of mixed feelings on this, though I'm not sure why it's ranked at a 2.0 right now. You're certainly a better writer than that! It's a bit early to proper judge or critique this fic, so I'll just have to wait and see...
~ Minstrel of Equestria
weaboo fightan ponies
59670 An understandable reaction. However I'd like to note that when I used "Crossover" as a tag, I wasn't necessarily referring to MLP:FiM in this case. As the campaign took place before the show had even started, you're going to find the number of references to the show to be somewhat lacking for a good while. The main aspect of the tag in this case is the fact that we combined to many other things into it. It may not be all that clear now, but down the line it will be blatantly obvious. I would however, like to thank you for the complement.
Looks good so far, hope to see more soon.
Excellent read! I spotted a few errors in the beginning, but I'm not bothered to point them out right now. ;P
Can't wait for more!
I thought you were all song kind of crazy vigilantes or something." ... Umm, whut? You mean some kind of, or... ?
Also, in the beginning, you did it a TON of tomes, so no quotes, but it's means it is, not possessive. You need to fix just about every single it's into its, which is possessive.
It's... Interesting, I guess. I mean... Okay, please don't take this the wrong way, since I'd like to think that you want honest input, but I don't want to come off as rude or arrogant, you know? Right now, the story just doesn't grip me. It doesn't make me go " *Pinkie Gasp* Come on! I want the next chapter! What happens next?!' It just... Doesn't really draw me in. I know that's a poor critique, since I can't explain why or how, or how to improve it, but that's what I feel. I just... Don't care like I should. Don't worry, I'll keep reading for sure! It's just... I don't know. Gonna shut up before I shove my hoof down my throat more than I am right now.
hey there readers, i was enjoying my christmas break on Wutai, enjoying some quiet delicious flames when it thought to myself you know what would be fun, breaking the fourth wall, hahahaha and i was right, thoroughly enjoyable
95935 Hey!
You get back behind that fourth wall this instant young pony! 
When am i coming in??
I want in 
Well since everyone else is breaking the fourth wall, i might as well enjoy the fun as well.
xD Well, I'm not sure what I should be reading now: the story or the comments!
Bravissimo to the lot of you, especially the author et al, if they exist! :D
112119 The players thought it would be funny to burst and make a few jokes here and there. I didn't expect 3 though
113085 Neither was I!
Mwahaha surprises to author and fans!
^and don't give all the credit to these awesome characters to the author, just the mp.
sorry ChaosknightRB just saying it how it is
175995 I'm sorry, I couldn't hear you over the character I designed specifically for you. Sorry Jack, just saying how it is
oh well
You have peaked the esteemed interest of guoff léfield!
SWEET ANCIENT HOLY MOJO THIS IS AWESOME!!!!
Hey guys what are ya' buying?
MUST READ MORE.
MUST DO SCIENCE.
HOJO IS COOL.
Wow hey i was wondering something what style is the shinra restroom decorated in?
Also gery does the name Vincent mean anything to you?
Somepony head to a item/weapon/materia shop pronto these suckers are woefully ill equipped for this mission!