Thank you for faving Momma.

Thanks for faving Sunsets over a Gala. I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for the fave on "a little bit of chaos in my life"

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Thanks! I did place a lot of thought into this story, trying to make the game and real life seem seamless, which just adds to the fact that Equestrian Earth feels that realistic to the players. Only my - terminology as you put it - keeps it the fact that it's a video game.

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Wow, I enjoyed the //.hack vibe I got from it, it really brought me back. I'd have to say some of my favorite parts aren't the battles, although those are executed very well, but how you bring this video-game world to life through your terminology, reminding us that although everything seems real for the reader AND the ponies, that it's just a well executed V.R. game. I like the touch as to how you show level-up bonuses and specialized their attacks to match them as well.