The battle of the Storm King was one of utmost importance and failure. One that plagues Luna even to this day. It is a thought that wrenches her mind back to the idea that perhaps Nightmare Moon may be better suited to run the kingdom, to subjugate any enemy they may face so that Twilight does not have to. But when the night comes and her mind weighs the heaviest on this revelation, the dreaded voice returns. It calls and claws its way back to the surface of her heart, dripping with intention, waiting to be unleashed…but…the voice that wants so desperately to be free isn't Nightmare Moon.
Chapters (8)
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You lost me
Why isn't there a Nightmare Moon tag?
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In the comics, Rarity goes through a Nightmare Rarity arc... I'm guessing that cloudy presence is what he's referencing and asking if that is what you are calling "Night."
Interesting, I admit greatly enjoy stories involving twilight and Luna and this one even has Tempest Shadow thrown in to make it interesting. As a side note I like those first two images especially the first one with Luna and twilight.
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Well the premise of the story is a nightmare of sorts, so it could go a variety of ways
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Love it
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Appreciate it Sugar
Dark... An interesting chapter looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Very strange ending...
Yuusss!!! Finally!! A MagnaLuna story! It has come! Praise the moon! I’m coming my goddess, Selene! Great story so far, so different than other stories focusing on the past of the royal sisters! Completely different from what I was expecting and I’m loving every minute of it!
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Thank you so much! I hope It’s lived up to your expectations so far.
Is there going to be a sequel? At least a small one off? It seems like it with that last entry and it’s making me anxious! Anyways loved the final chapter! Can’t wait to know what happens to the Lunas!
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I’m sure you noticed but there are a ton of things to resolve in the past and in the present, a sequel is totally planned woomy!
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What's a woomy?
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Sorry, I’m on a really hard Splatoon Kick right now....for like uh...since Splatoon 1 released? The Woomy is something that they say when they’re excited and stuff and I just kinda started instinctively adding it to my sentence structure for some reason.
I'm so confused.
I’m sorry to say that I’m drawing a blank about what I thought of the story. Been so long and so many other stories
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Don’t be, I can see where it might have gotten confusing here and there. If you need clarification, feel free to ask.
I love the art, it gives it a fresh look and fire the imagination.
Always been a fan of Luna like the younger one, reflecting the moon in her mane more than just the night and stars.
Ugh, I just hope you tags don't mean bad Sadness and darkness... Sadness.
Sadness...
Weird but good, still want a miracle to happen, but the ending is rather bittersweet, though I am ignoring the last to entries of the diary until if there is a sequel.
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Oh cod thank you, I wasn’t sure based on your last comment whether it would throw you off or not. I’m eager to know exactly what made it weird. though so don’t hesitate to let good old Mariana know.
As for the sequel, it’s a work in progress for sure. I wrote this chapter with the intent to produce a sequel yes, just not as soon as some might wish. Kinda want to save it for a later day, after I've checked some other ideas off the list.
Oh wow this was an amazing story and I am truly looking forward to the sequel.
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it. It's one of the only ones I considered successful.