Everyone's heard stories about the Dark Prison. It's high security,uncomfortable and dangerous. Ultra Violet is fresh out of college and has had some run ins with the law. When they decide to punish her for destroying property she goes straight to Dark Prison . Will she make friends or enimies? Will she even survive?
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I was trying to keep it prison style while also staying away from the violence tag.
Hmmmmmm
It's a very well thought out idea...but if it's an abandoned warehouse it can be used in any way by the public.
Vandalism isn't a very legitimate reason, to go to prison (destroying something that big is destruction of property). 2-3 days in county jail at best and a small fine.
Also if she spent most of her time in parties and jail during college she would've most likely been kicked out. Miracle that she graduated.
I'm being honest here, this story falls short on context. It's good and hell, could be better. Work on your context and you'll see this fly. Try to put more meaning behind Ultra and why she wanted to study science, add a reason why she's more of a party gal and not a drunkard.
Context. It's the actual reason behind the words. Add some more into this jewel. I want to see this go big.
Also, good idea. Using the trope of the "teenage mind" in a grown character really sets the mood for this.
Thank yo for the constructive criticism I'll fix it.
I'm gonna need some advice on how to fill in the next chapter