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You uh....might wanna bring up that rating
chanting 'Bump up the rating'
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The guy might not put any sex in.
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Not referring to that. But the picture does make it look suggestive.
This is interesting for sure. I can't wait to see what kind of question's Celestia's mother will ask Spike about their relationship. It will be fun for Spike to learn more about Celestia as well, find out that she is far more like a everyday Pony than he ever knew. Or find out about her filly years as well as her awkward teenage years lol.
Wow
Celestia you troll
How is Twilight gonna react about him & Celestia's relationship.............................if she find out though?
I like this but at the same time, it feels rushed.
Secret lovers.
"Oh, we never told her, did we?" Spike paused, looking over to Celestia, silently praying that she follows the bit, "I mean, we've been meaning to tell you for a few months now... what was it? Six? Seven? But we never really found the right time, and things kept getting in the way, like the whole Tirek fiasco... PLUS, there's the fact that the public might not exactly take it the right way: that their eternal, all powerful ruler is dating not just a non-pony, a hideous beast that's been known throughout time and tale to eat fillies and colts as soon as they see them... So sorry if we kept it a bit too close to the vest to tell anyone."
A bit quick but interesting. Has the potential to be more, because this felt like a 2 chapter intro.
Good job!
How a about a complete sequel series where Spike and Celestia go on clandestine dates and adding some humor to it, each date ends up having them run into one of the Mane 6 and Luna spying on them. This is has serious potential.
Lite.
This could be an amazing story. Have them go on a few dates and maybe have her parents start saying they want them to get married so Equestria can have a king or something
Celestia's mom feels like the type to say " You give me a grandchild or i make you a sibling."
I will be honest here, I am not a fan of the turn this story is taking. I don't like both sisters throwing themselves at Spike. It felt so much more interesting and intimate when Celestia offered the second date and really their whole interaction. Now it just feel like all the romance of the story was cheapened by this chapter. I can see Luna coming there to find out more, for sure. But to than go and kiss him like that it really feel odd and like a forced way to up the tension and force the story along. I hope it finds a way to bounce back for me or idk
Interesting....
Sisters, man! Good luck Spike. This family is crazy!
Very interesting... Wants more just to see what will happen next. GG
Discord would be like "Spike. Where were you?"
Spike: Dating Celestia
Discord: You.... Nice
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Sooooo judging by reading this I'm just gonna straight up assume that this is gonna be a celestia X spike X Luna fanfic right.........hmmmm I'm piqued with interest now.
OK, first Luna tells Spike her sister usually has higher standers then him, pretty much insulting him,
then she kisses him out of the blue, just leaving him confused and disgusted, I don't know if I'm supposed to be rooting for a sister but if I do Luna isn't winning herself any favours.
After this, can you do another Spike shipping story?
Oooo! This is getting juicy!
Well Spike, I don't recall Celestia saying to keep the relationship a secret!
Get your date, and have fun!
This ought to be a interesting story.
awesome
You don't need a new line after every sentence. Paragraphs are your friend. Might just be an import error.
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That reminds me of a rwby meme.
Hmmm....yes
Please update.
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I’m trying, trust me. College life takes up the vast majority of my time.
Really hope she's not giving him false impressions. I'd rather Spike not be toyed with.
I sure hope both of them are not just using him to get their rocks off.
Great chapter, I really hope he doesn't get involved with Celestia's mother and Luna. I just honestly like the pairing of him and Celestia. The way she honestly leads the relationship and Spike just along for the ride but happy about it none the less. It makes them seem very cute. If he start to pull everyone in Celestia's family and around it will just make their relationship feel so much weaker and cheaper. So seeing it get back to the two of them felt great to see.
Discord: "Where the hell were you?!"
Spike: "You wouldn't believe me if I told you."
D: "Try me."
S: "Well, see, it involves meeting Celestia's parents, oddly enough..."
D: "!!!"
Any idea when this will be continued?
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Probably not till officially till next year, but I’ll try to squeeze a chapter in before the holidays.
Heh. I'll say...seeing as how she was the one to find his egg.
It's alive!
Just updated? Looks like I found this story at a great time.
Feel like this rating should maybe get upped.
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Second that! Why limit yourself!?
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I’m not great when it comes to writing out fully explicit sex scenes, but I have raised the overall rating to mature just in case something fun does end up coming out of the next chapter.
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Yay. And it doesn't have to be to explicit, or overly detailed. A quickly of events, and just don't want you to get in trouble.
Talking about someone looking aroused, and groping someone's clothed dick is two different things.
Keep up the great work. Love to see where this relationship is going. And what, Luna's, up to.
Why do I get these vibes