Terrified in a land filled with multi-colored ponies, an Undead Mage, by the name of Zarram, attempts to get back home.Will he get back home and learn a thing or two in the process? Read and find out... You know, if this dangerously generic description doesn't scare you away first...
But hey, at least someone shut the inter-dimensional door, right?
*Seeing as Zarram is technically undead, I find it hard to classify this as a traditional "Human In Equestria" fiction. However, since he was once alive as a human, and apparently the demographic for Undead in Equestria fics seem to be small, this WILL be classified as a HIE Fic... just hope it's not too generic*
And yes, everything that you guys know doesn't have to do with MLP:FIM and seems alien to you is probably mine. Yup, I created Zarram, Dreadnorr and everything else, only using minor references and "Easter Eggs" to other sources such as games, books, movies, and all that good stuff. Since my original series is still incomplete, and not very known, I cannot, in all good conscious, call this a crossover
Also, if anyone feels this should have a "Dark" tag, just tell me and I'll see if I can change it
Picture coming soon, need to learn to draw ponies...*
Big thanks to NATOstrike for helping me edit some stuff.
Can you link us to the original source of all the stuff in this fic? like the story's they are from etc etc
Ok beginning hope to read more
I would like to see where Zarram and Dreadnorr are from. Still, it's a good story.
"Portals for dummies by Johnson Cave"
I lol'd
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Sadly, any source of literature I've had with them, and my original universe, is most likely on my other computer which is, for a lack of better words, derpy right now. However, you can check out my DA account . I wouldn't recommend looking too much into it, mainly because a lot of what I have there is old and I've reworked a lot of it recently (And due to possible spoilers). At the very least, you might get a look at what the characters look like if you search for their names in my gallery.
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I'm glad to hear that. What made it only okay though as opposed to good or great?
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Hehehe, references for the win!
1001720 well it's kinda like if your putting someone who has done the same thing for a long time that got little experience from the job into a new world without his inventory.
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Okay, I think I see where you're coming from.
Why don't I believe you?
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What? Why wouldn't you believe him lol?
"Portals for dummies, by Johnson Cave... Excellent."
"Oh, James? Yeah, he had to stay and help out at the academy today, something with combustible fruit and such,"
I see what you did there.
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It's a pleasure to see you see what I did there, Mr. Freeman
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Combustible lemons and Johnson Cave... I almost peed. Maybe I did, just a bit.
Overall, the writing is quite solid. There were a couple of word replacements/typos and a few very minor punctuation errors. Nothing glaringly wrong or out of place.
My only gripe, and this is something that I bitch around about every time I see it so don't take it personally, but AN's within the text of the story always bothers me. It's a good way to completely derail an otherwise smooth reading story. Yours are not terribly distracting since they're at the beginning and end, so if you insist on having them in-story that's the place to put them... yes, actually I have seen them in the middle of stories before, and that was right at the point I stopped reading and facepalmed, then went about my business of doing anything but continuing to read said story.
I like it... have a clapping Vinyl Scratch.
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I'm glad you found it funny. Usually I think my humor (using a ton of references) is dumb. Heck, even the title is a reference...
Did I do that with both chapters so far? I'll try to keep it in the beginning from now on If I need to.
Yay!
"Come on now, let's get moving, daylight's burning!"
THEY SET CELESTIA ON FIRE?!
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Heh, good thing they're going to see her soon.