This story is a sequel to One Bolt, Moving Forward
Finally, Twilight's school is about to open! Boltsinger was doing everything he could to make the process easier, taking care of the baby, making sure the everypony was ready to go, it was all going smoothly. Then he found a book. A glowing, vibrating book. Curious, he opened it up to find a series of exchanges between Twilight and someone named "Sunset". And then, his wings decided to do their thing. He took off, flying straight into an odd mirror. When he woke up, he found himself... elsewhere... Strange creatures, strange machines, strange Bolt! What will he find in this new place? Who will he meet? And, most importantly, why can't he go back?!
(As always, cover art will change when I can get something fitting.)
Not a fan of Equestria Girls stories, but ill stick around
this season out to be interesting since it takes place with eqg
thats one way to find out
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Well it saved Bolt all the trouble to try and explain it to her
I'm liking this so far, big fan of EQG so excited to see where this goes.
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Glad you're enjoying it! Especially since you sorta gave me the idea.
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hehe that's cool though when I made that comment I would have also accepted Sunset just popping over to Equestria for a visit. Won't complain about getting an EQG mini-story though
Makes me wonder if she knew Twilight had gotten married or if she had even received a wedding invite.
Just fix bond to blonde
Good chapter though
Was not expecting this as a sequel but it is a welcome one.
When I am waiting for the next one after Getting His Bearings. Talking with Tallfry(The owner) and getting way to excited for the next one.
This means I am going to fanboy him.
GREAT!
Ah the classic "parents are alive in the other world" trope. Normally that's reserved for Applejack, should be interesting.
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Yeah, it's a bit tropey, but I felt that it made sense considering what I have planned.
Well, lemme give you an upvote then
When you catch up to the story but you have to stop reading it
whoa
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Que the transformation
Well, that was exciting though the way it's described it sounds like you used the old designs for the transformations.
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I was thinking of Legend of Everfree's transformations. Sadly I coudln't come up with good descriptions for them, and was more focused on what was happening in the moment. If I can get a better description for each of them out of this head of mine, I'll go back and put them in.
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That's what I mean, they changed the designs in the new specials.
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Ah. Didn't realize that. I'll have to look into the new designs at some point.
You did not dissapoint
Mother and son???
did you mean Husband and son?
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I do indeed. Damn autocorrect and my fat thumbs kick in when I'm writing from my phone. Thanks again for pointing that kind of stuff out.
Awwww. that was sweet. that was wonderful. Good Job. Well onto book 4
The only thing I don't understand is why boltsinger is hiding his marriage to princess twilight from his pseudo-family, and his child from sunset's friends. I'm sure it will be explained in the story, though.
loving the EQG spinoff.
Heh. Made me feel like this.
https://youtu.be/UvuyCeYbmwA
As applejack says; "putting those two in their places makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside"
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Unfortunately, I never intended for Bolt to explain his reasoning for hiding things. It was more something that was implied by the setting. Explanation to follow.
What I mean by that is that they're... kinda teenagers. They haven't even thought of the idea of getting married or having a baby, and I'd figured that they thought the Equestrian Twilight hadn't gotten to that point yet, either.
Besides, it adds to the drama!