DESCRIPTION UPDATE!
Ever since the royal wedding, Soarin has had a crush on Rainbow Dash. A year later when Rainbow Dash joins the Wonderbolt's, Soarin's crush on her becomes bigger and bigger which means he becomes crazier and crazier about her. Rainbow Dash is also in love with Soarin but doesn't admit it at first because of her stubbornest. One day Soarin and Rainbow Dash go on a friend-zoned date and throughout their 'date', Soarin confesses his feelings. Will this be happily ever after or did the drama just begin?
WARNING: Swearing, sexual content, dirty flirting, nothing to do with sexual interaction, lots of fluff that might kill you
Chapters (14)
nice! enjoying this!
A little choppy around the edges with some word choice and structure; some good proofreading or a competent editor will straighten all this out and allow your story to flow more smoothly. Arguably, this is completely cliche — but, really, who doesn't love cliches when it comes to romance, even when they say they don't?
Still, it's plenty entertaining to read for your average MLP schmoe like me, so keep it up!
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Thanks for the advice, I'm kinda new to this
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Thank you!
Look like I'm really gonna enjoy this story here.
Loved this chapter.
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I mean ALL of Fleetfoot's immature stuff
I'm being honest with you, I started cracking up while writing that part
A little rush but I didn't mind it to much, but I love the childish nature of both Soarin and Dash have while on their date.
Sooooooo
They're going back to her place *insert lenny face*
*cough* okay I'll go now
There were those few little moments in the story that had me laughing (the fact that AJ was not bothered by Soarin’s sad rejection story), not many stories have me doing that. As for someone who doesn’t really ship SoarinDash, I like this story!!
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Aww thx so much! Stay tuned for the next few chapters coming out soon!
Oh.....No 0_0
I think it's funny how pinkie pie reaches the fourth wall, I wonder if she can ever reach the fifth wall too. And I really do hope Soarin's plan works and otherwise Rainbow Dash is just going to reject him again and make it even worst because of her past. I love this already and liking it alot and excited to see what happens next.
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Glad u like it! Wait theres a fifth wall?
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part. You should go to Youtube and see it. 
Just type in Gala con and you'll see.
Yeah didn't you see the gala con episode of the cartoon pony saying "will Pinkie Pie ever reach the fifth wall"
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I get it now
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Yeah. Told you so.
This is one of the best lines in a story I have every read...Fleetfoot that was amazing
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I'm glad you liked it so much!
Guess Dash doesn’t understand that rejection is a way of still hurting someone. Also chances he might do something stupid.
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Maybe Soarin might do something stupid maybe he won't.... who knows
OH.....MY........SWEET CELESTIA OF THE SUUUUN
Wait!.....so, that mean that all of Equestria know the new!?
Imma cry nowAnd if Dash parent know about this.......
OOF....
GREAT CHAPTER!
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Dude.... you just gave me a good idea.
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When will we expect to see the next chapter?
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Sorry I've been offline because I forgot my password and omg it took me a long time to finally log back in. I've made plans with this chapter, it might come out in the next week or 2
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Ok. Also I know that Rainbow Dash didn’t want to hurt Soarin but she kinda did that anyway by breaking his heart. Good going Dash, Soarin is not acting like his usual self. I hope you’re happy. (that wasn’t towards you that was towards Rainbow Dash)
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I figured
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But seriously this is one of the best stories I ever read. I really hope Dash finally gets together with Soarin. They belong together. Keep up the good work! 👍🏻
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Aww thx so much
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No problem man!
Great chapter!
Also....
ShAmE oN yOu, FlEet!
HoW dARe Y'A PlAy "Pokemeon GO"!??!!
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Lol
And thxx
Wow! That was so clever of them! Also to Rainbow Dash: Now you’re gonna pay for hurting Soarin anyway by breaking his heart. So you better apologize and get together with him! But in all seriousness wonderful 2 chapters man! And such a clever idea. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Well I think this is REALLY interesting indeed,
can't wait to see what happens inside that room. And Twilight is right Rainbow and Soarin NEED to talk and settled they're difference right here, right now! 
rather they like it or not!
they are going to be stuck in that room, until they make up apologize and be a couple! 
HAA I am loving this (and the truth or dare part was a clever idea too)
Twilight snapped
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Yes she did
oh gosh, this is an amazing and very well written story
jeez, your detail is on point. super cute. keep on going, haha ❤
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(even dough I haven't been on here for like two months lol)
i try my best to impress
FINALLY!
I'm happy that you updated! Otherwise, is a cute little chapter! Can't wait to see the last chapter!
Wich I'm very sad about it because your story are the best ;w;Are you really gonna make a sequel?
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Yup and I'm planning and writing right now as we speak
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No way! I’m so excited!!!!!!
Oooohhh a sequel I like that idea there my friend,
and I loved this chapter and book too.
(although I think the other chapter must have been really spicy🌶🍬💝 and sweet between Dash and Soarin tinthe room,
and the cameras they regret that). Peace out my friend.☮✌️☮️✌️
FOR A SECOND A THOUGHT THAT FLUTTERSHY SAID THAT-
OMGGG, MY HEART STOPED FOR REEAAALL ;-;
Ahem, ANYWHAYS
EEEEEEEEEEE-
I LIKE THE ENDING!!
WAIT-
NO
I LOVEEE THE STORYYY!! ALL THE SORAINDASH FLUFF! Sksksksksksks
You did an amazing job on this story!
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Thanks you! Glad you liked it, go read the squeal that I'm currently writing