Hey guys! It's me, Discord!
Summer Sun Celebration is coming! Twilight and Spike have traveled to Ponyville for ensuring everything is ready. However, Twilight can't forget one thing: after 1000 years, the Mare in the Moon could return.
Oh, and another pony appears at Ponyville. But... isn't it Princess Luna?
This story has been requested by JimmyHook19. Hope you like it!
P.S: Apologies for chapters 1-4 being short. I wanted to go direct to the point. Don't worry, next chapters should be longer.
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ohhhh nooooo
the warranty didn’t say anything about magic portals!
now he needs to buy a new one!
hmm
this is awkward for him i bet
9050123
Wow, such a fast reader!
spooky
9050127
for a second, I thought you time traveled!
also, I sure am! thanks for the compliment!
her jaw DROPPED
badum TSSSSSSSSSS
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lol
Why did you make the chapters so short?
9050267
Oh, those are just the first chapters. I'll try to make the next ones a bit longer.
It's okay for a start it seem a bit rushed and almost lacking feeling and some details, like how would fluttering even know about NMM/luna coming back? I feel that some chapters could have more detail to give a better feel to them rather than the current monotone. But overall great story idea just editing parts would be good.
9051022
Hey, thanks for the feedback. I can make the next chapters have more details, but I'm glad you like the story so far.
9051060
Yw
Noice =3
9056299
Good to know you like it so far!
9056306
yep :)
I think Rainbow Dash would be next, right? :3
9056311
Hmmm... Maaaaaaybe?
We'll find out on the next chapter!
9056321
okay :3
Wow
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You like it?
9056351
yes
9056449
Nice.
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yes
beautiful
one problem:
it should be one million dollar/bit question
unless Jimmy has asked himself 1 million questions?
9056705
Fixed! Thanks for telling me.
9057058
yey!
9057622
Oh yeah.... I got a feeling I will be meeting my favorite Mane 6 Member and Most Adorkable pony herself :3
9066338
Hehe, yep!
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:)
I had to put the Adorkable part because, Heh, that's what we know Twilight Sparkle for in the Fanbase: Being our Loveable Adorkable Pony! <3
9066357
So right.
9066403
yep :3
But...
Luna is a full-grown alicorn.
Alicorns are considerably taller than regular ponies.
This is a bit strange.
9072221
Well, it was the first thing that came to my mind.
*ahem*
MOOOOAAAAARRRRRRR
please
9076133
Hehe. Don't worry, next chapters will come soon!
Heh, I remember from a certain Tom and Jerry cartoon that Jerry held up a sign when he accidently poked Tom with too many pins while Tom was in the Gift Box :3
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That was a nice moment there.
9081081
yep :)
here's the image btw: static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/doc_house.jpg
Yes. Yes there is.
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lol yes
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"Is it you?"
9083406
Definitely!
*force chokes background pegasus*
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"Wow! Nice! Although I would prefer them being able to breathe, but anyways!"
9083404
Heh :3
Best part of the entire story for me :3
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Glad to know you love it.
9110461
yep :3
So if I had to guess, next chapter will be the Summer Sun Celebration and the return of Nightmare Moon? :3
9110465
Nailed it.
9110471
Awesome :3
Hopefully I won't have to wait too long for the next chapter