The remnants of Newshire must traverse a dangerous mutated jungle filled with all manner of new and never before seen creatures to reach the megaspell's impact zone, reverse its magic and return the island to its former glory.
9013745 Yes and no. The timber-beasts act like the timber wolves would from the evergreen forest. The Briarhooves would be you pseudo-children of atom. But with a more treeminders feel from fallout 3 feel.
What I like about this chapter is the idea of things being simple in the Stable, that they can make their own fun from a game of tag and that games and movies grow old fast.
The inner monologues interest me.is he just daydreaming or thinking to himself? It'd be interesting if he is giving this information to someone or something telepathically, like the Goddess from the original FO:E or a different creature. The Game too, I wonder if it's just a game, or if it will play a part in the bigger picture.
As a nitpick, the 'love' relationship that I assume is Solani feels a little rushed, but this works if this isn't the relationship you want to focus on, or if this isn't the aspect of the relationship you want to put in the spotlight. The friendship with Isu and Xye is really interesting and so I'm curious what will happen with both.
So I take it the Timber-Beasts are related to the Briarhooves somehow?
9013745
Yes and no. The timber-beasts act like the timber wolves would from the evergreen forest. The Briarhooves would be you pseudo-children of atom. But with a more treeminders feel from fallout 3 feel.
What I like about this chapter is the idea of things being simple in the Stable, that they can make their own fun from a game of tag and that games and movies grow old fast.
The inner monologues interest me.is he just daydreaming or thinking to himself? It'd be interesting if he is giving this information to someone or something telepathically, like the Goddess from the original FO:E or a different creature. The Game too, I wonder if it's just a game, or if it will play a part in the bigger picture.
As a nitpick, the 'love' relationship that I assume is Solani feels a little rushed, but this works if this isn't the relationship you want to focus on, or if this isn't the aspect of the relationship you want to put in the spotlight. The friendship with Isu and Xye is really interesting and so I'm curious what will happen with both.
All good things,
Duskhoof