I don't think they know Spike is a dragon, I believe that's going to come into a bigger surprise. I wonder if their attitude would change once they know who he is. Now I can't wait for the next chapter.
What really confused him was the missing section of documents that spoke about relationships. The only reason he knew that it should be here is that everything else was here and when he was going for his degree to teach he remembered there being a section about dress code.and student to student, student to teacher and teacher to teacher relationships. Mainly that section was short and said don't date students if you want to keep your job. He would have to ask Mrs. Silvermane about this when she got back.
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Before the elderly unicorn could try to pull him out of the apartment he held up a claw to stop her. "Ok, but I'd rather wait on meeting the students. I've already warmed the food with my fire, and if what twilight told me about Pinkie's parties are true then it would be a bit much for me right now."
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"Well, I met Twilight before she REALLY got into her studies. We knew each other for about ohh... six months before she buried her nose in her books, and when she did that she stopped talking to EVERYPONY." -Spike chuckled at the end-"As for all the restrictions, let's just say I bumped into a royal on accident. If I was a pony he'd probably had just gotten irritated and yelled at me for not watching were i was going and walk off, but being a dragon it didn't end so well. He accused that I attacked him and I was imprisoned. After a week of no trial my folks managed to contact someone with ample power and had the charges dropped and me released. Unfortunately he didn't have enough power to cut through all the red tape and remove the incident from my record, so he just buried the rest of my file in a mountain of more red tape so practically only the princesses can see it," Spike lied through his teeth.
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Rarity let out squeal as she was getting her thirst for romantic gossip quenched tonight. "Did you two talk about anything other than homework?"
Rarity, she just told you that he's only a few weeks away from 18, and that it's been 15 years since they last talked. He was two or three years old at the time.
9200905 I'm so glad someone else noticed that... Also, I'm pretty sure they said the school was founded 16 yeas ago around his first birthday, but hes about to turn 18 so it should of been his 2nd birthday >_>
Huh.....that was actually a rather nice chapter. So i have no idea what you are going on about ;) keep up the good work :D
I don't think they know Spike is a dragon, I believe that's going to come into a bigger surprise. I wonder if their attitude would change once they know who he is. Now I can't wait for the next chapter.
I called blush+steamed-ears+nosebleed.
im starting to like this more and more
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Rarity, she just told you that he's only a few weeks away from 18, and that it's been 15 years since they last talked. He was two or three years old at the time.
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Yeah, I don't think that the Author thought through the timeline very well.
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I'm so glad someone else noticed that... Also, I'm pretty sure they said the school was founded 16 yeas ago around his first birthday, but hes about to turn 18 so it should of been his 2nd birthday >_>
This was a awesome chapter and it was great yo not only learn a little more about there relationship buy also it was cute to read it.