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Silver Spoon’s day doesn’t go like any other. Her friends on the household staff treat her more like their boss, rather than their friend; Her three best friends no longer like her for some reason, and the biggest and most arrogant school bully who has been tormenting her for years is acting suspiciously friendly towards her.

Silver Spoon’s day doesn’t go like any others. The house servants are more talkative and more friendly than ever, no longer acting as formal and professional as they should. Three blank-flanks keep inviting her to spend time with them for some reason, and her best friend Diamond Tiara… betrayed her in worst way possible.

Something is clearly wrong.

How will each Silver Spoon survive such a big change in their life, and how will everyone react to their change of attitude? Only time will tell.

Special thanks to:
TheSoulBlades
Gearhead+Gears
For a massive revision/proof-reading of the story.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 100 )

WOW took me a while to understand what the fuck was going on. In insight should have realized all of this after reading the title, derpehderp.

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I did not expect this story. I didn't anticipate clicking on it, reading my description and finding out that I had already tracked it by instinct alone. I haven't even started reading it and I am already loving the premise. Well... let's check it out.

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Yep! Thumbs up! Looking forward to more!

Comment posted by FullMoon deleted Jun 16th, 2018

Very interesting premise. Don't usually like Silver Spoon/Tiara stories, but this one could be interesting.

I like your blurb. This Shall Be Read.

Huh, for the first time i find myself interested in a Silver Spoon/Diamond Tiara centric story. I look forward to what goes on from here.

I hope the two of them get to meet before this is all over. I can see it now: there they are, face to face, a couple of Silver Spoons...

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I did not expect this story. I didn't anticipate clicking on it, reading my description and finding out that I had already tracked it by instinct alone. I haven't even started reading it and I am already loving the premise. Well... let's check it out.
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Yep! Thumbs up! Looking forward to more!

Sounds like someone really like Silver Spoon or hoped to see her grow from being Tiara's sidekick.

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Ooh, this is interesting. Tracking for sure! I see a lot of potential.

Very interesting premise. Don't usually like Silver Spoon/Tiara stories, but this one could be interesting.

I hope it won't be a wasted potential. Will try not to disapoint.

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Huh, for the first time i find myself interested in a Silver Spoon/Diamond Tiara centric story. I look forward to what goes on from here.

Actually, it's more of Silver Spoon, CMC centric. Though Tiara have numberous apperances as well.

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I hope the two of them get to meet before this is all over. I can see it now: there they are, face to face, a couple of Silver Spoons...

This would start rather awkward.

Bullying was always a big problem I faced in my elementary and middle school years, so stories that have to do with bullies learning their lesson and similar topics/situations are always interesting to me. I honestly can't wait to see where this goes and what kind of lessons are learned.

Reading this story for the first time, I can tell Silver's parents are going to be pleased by the switch.

Surprised to see this in the new stories section of the featured list again, but if it is a from the ground up rewrite then that's fine by me. I never got around to reading the previous version, so I don't know how they might differ.

Interested in seeing where this goes. So far, it's been quite amusing. The prologue coasted by quickly, establishing alt-Spoon's behavior, but chapter 1 was quite amusing. Discord has the right idea!

Hopefully it won't take too long for somepony to openly point out that Silver Spoon keeps referring to events that they do not recall the same way. Admittedly, Apple Bloom, being in class, has a better excuse than Soft Rose for not doing so.

This story: I like it! Keep it rolling!

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I hope I won't disapoint.

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Reading this story for the first time, I can tell Silver's parents are going to be pleased by the switch.

I'm not sure of mother of the mian Silver Spoon will be all that happy. After all, Silver always listened to her, and the alternative one is more of a rebel who may defy her.

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Well. The first one didn't get featured, but this one did, so I think the improvements made by my two proof-readers did wonders to the story. Even if it didn't stay in feature box for long, it's noting to sneeze at.

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Speaking of Discord, he may get into trouble if he won't stay under the radar.

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Really? I could have sworn it was featured. Although I suppose that maybe I was looking at the new stories list.

The situation will clear up sooner or later. So It's surprising that Discord giving hint to Diamond Tiara sped up the inevitable instead of muddying the water. I still enjoyed it though.

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That's making the assumption that Diamond Tiara's behavior won't just make things worse. See, the best lies use a lot of truth, and DT isn't the most socially adept filly to begin with; by egging her on, Discord provokes her into screwing up.

It's actually right up his alley. Twilight is the one he needs to worry about; she could suck all the fun out of the situation before anyone learns their lessons. The author has the same interpretation of reformed Discord that I do; instead of messing with ponies to make them turn against their true nature, he forces them to reveal the ugliness already inside of them and confront it. Like he does to Twilight. Repeatedly.

Nitpick:

get her back, black fl–”

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“Oopsy indeed,” Twilight said before turning towards him. Her face radiating in anger as water nearly evaporated from her face as the result. “You teleported me into the stream under the bridge.”

“Sorry. I wanted to teleport you onto the bridge so you could have a pleasant view. It wasn’t intentional,” Discord answered while scratching back of his neck nervously.

Twilight shook her body before flying up to Discord’s face. “Nevermind that.

Twilight does seem to cool down after this, but it still seems a bit odd to me that she would blow off an apology with those words if the offense was enough to make her so mad she was almost evaporating the water she had fallen into, instead of explicitly accepting it—however curtly. (If the offense was actually trivial to her, then I could see it.)

Still, that's a very minor point. Overall, the scene was pretty good, and I wouldn't necessarily say that it's too soon. I was expecting at least one of the crusaders to get on the case first, but Twilight+crusader(s) would be about as interesting. I suppose the question now is whether DT will beat them to it.

Yeah, see, I'm not overly fond of Discord playing at being a mentor, which is more to amuse himself and humiliate others as actually teaching them, and not getting any serious pushback at some point. This looks like it won't be the case here since he's screwing up lives left and right. Twilight should be very cross with him, he's breaking up friendships left and right.

Did SilverSpoon get switched with her own doppelganger from another reality?

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Twilight is the only one who can get on Discord's case, so it may be only a matter of time before she finds the truth. The question is how lives of both Spoons will be affected in the meanwhile.

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Fixed, thanks.

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Eeyup. :eeyup:

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I think it might end up with the cmc, spoon and tiara as friends in both dimensions.

He is still screwing with lives though.

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Or it could end up with all of them hurt and confused. That's the problem with Discord's "mentoring", he breaks into your house and smashes your things because he likes seeing people angry or unhappy, and when you're done picking up the mess he'll gloat about what you're supposed to have learned from it.

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If you're asking this in chapter 3 you obviously haven't been reading the story...especially since that's all but spelled out in the story description.

It would be funny if the less-independent Silver Spoon was more proactive in roping others into the mystery.

I know that things are going pretty well for the Silver Spoons, but I hope that Discord does get at least some kind of punishment for his reckless actions (unlike Starlight).

I STILL love that look on Sweeties face in the picture

Wanderer D
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I've always like Spoon as the more balanced of the two, back in the bully days. Although there's always a devious enjoyment at writing Diamond Tiara-redemption fics :P

I give up. Silver Spoon will wake up and be like, "this is the first time my dreams have had a sequel!"

Oh, suddenly I understand why I couldn't find the story that I edited in my library. You posted it as a new story! Dang it!

Ach! There's a random quotation mark at the beginning of the first sentence. How'd I miss that!?

and the price for second worst mom goes to....

This story is fantastic. I can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:

sheesh, i leave a comment saying i cant wait for more chapters, and not even five minutes later you uploaded a new chapter. talk about awesome coincidence :yay:

“Winona!” Apple Bloom shouted before giving Discord a stern glare. “You take away those wings and return Winona back to the farm this instant.”

Oh my gosh *laughing so hard*!

Silver Spoon looked around to examine the area. From a distance she saw a crowd had once again gathered to watch the ongoing battle. Several ponies were running around in a desperate attempt to prepare a wedding on a later date, and a few ponies were sitting outside of the cafe, waiting for their dishes to be served.

Wow, great survival instincts, huh?

Silver Spoon looked around from her sitting spot outside of a cafe, perched against a pile of hay. Apple Bloom and Twist sitting on the opposite side of the table.

I wonder where Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle went. Oh, also, that last sentence is actually incomplete. Maybe you meant to put a comma after hay?

“See, this monster nearly destroyed an entire building, now imagine if your sister was slammed into one next and crushed alongside it, how would you feel than, hmn?”

Quick note, should be “then,” not “than.”

Discord of universe 1 and Discord of universe 7. :trixieshiftleft: Yeah, that makes sense.

Come on Nice SilverSpoon, you’re smart, I’m share you can figure it out that you’ve switched places with another you... eventually.

Brilliant chapter.

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Surprice. Hehe. That sure was a funny conincidence.

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Wow, great survival instincts, huh?

Just a scene that took place in the episode. Trust me, alternative Silver Spoon is just as surpriced as you are.

Also, fixed the mistakes, thanks for pointing them out.

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To be honest, I did this on purpouse as it was a reference to something. The thing is, I wrote this story many years ago and now I forgot what reference it was refering to.

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I am sure she will. Though for now assisting her beloved princess is a top priority for her.

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B-but, I don't want to use up my entire supply of good luck for this year. :twilightsheepish:

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I'm not asking you to use up your supply of good luck. :twilightsmile:

Just your supply of totally awesomazing luck! :rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh:

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now I forgot what reference it was refering to.

It's a JoJo reference now. No buts.

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It's a reference to Dragon Ball Super, I think. In Dragon Ball Super, there are 12 universes. The main universe is universe 7.

So "nice" Silver Spoon isn't just nice, she's also more capable and smarter on top of things. Anything in favour of regular Silver Spoon, or is that one only there to be the inferior version?

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So "nice" Silver Spoon isn't just nice, she's also more capable and smarter on top of things. Anything in favour of regular Silver Spoon, or is that one only there to be the inferior version?

Well...
Alternative Silver Spoon is what real Silver Spoon would have become if raised under different circumstances.

The original one was raised by rich family in full comfort (father always busy to earn bits and overprotective mother who sure that Silver Spoon don't need to put efforts into anything. Not to mention that friendship with low-class filles is not something Silver's mother aprove of.

The alternative version sped a lot of time with her father (while mother is busy with her work), her family isn't as rich and her father is more to earth pony who value hard work more than status and how rich someone is. Not to mention that befriending CMC helped her get more initiative and improve her physical condition. When she started receiving lessons from Twilight Sparckle (Twilight Time), she also got a glimse of how heroes defend Equestira from dangers, which motivate her to be as good assistant as she can be for the princess she admires. (The fact that she didn't know what her cutie mark is about opened a door for her to befriend CMC).

The only thing that goes for original Silver Spoon is that she know what her cutie mark is about. She know that her speciality lies in cooking high-class food and preparing great tea, but since her mother is against physical labor, she never got the chance to use her talent for anyone.

So long story short, Silver Spoon have a potential to become a much better character if she was raised differently. Alternative Silver Spoon is an enbodiment of that.

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That's rather one-sided, isn't it? I must confess, it feels uncomfortable to have two versions of a character presented, one of whom (namely the one from the show) meant to be the obviously inferior one. That, and the superior variant also gets to talk down to the adults in town, like with MacIntosh, even though Twilight's friends are quite capable of dealing with monster attacks on their own. It was a mild surprise nobody told Silver Spoon she was underestimating them, even though she was, and everyone around her folded so easily.

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It is not about understaminating main 6. It is about the fact that when main 6 are risking their lifes and fighting with everything they got (for who knows how many times), everyone else not only do not appreate their efforts (taking them for granted), but also believe that wedding and other every-day activities are way more important than a battle that is going on and the lives that are being put at risk.

Main 6 may be skilled and all, but it doesn't mean that they are the only one who should show initiative everytime ( they were after all original citizens of Ponyville who just happened to team up with Twilight against Nightmare Moon (without the Elements they are still ponies). Rarity is a fashionista, Fluttershy is animal caretaker ( who at one point was afraid of her own shadow) and Pinkie likes to make others happy, but they aren't fighters (Big Macentosh have a lot more durability and muscle and will be more efficient in fight than some of main 6 members). Not to mention that Big Mac at one point said that unlike his sister he's no big hero. Well, he could be a hero of this fight if he just showed initiative.)

What I try to say is that alternative Silver Spoon cannot stand that everyone take main 6 saving the day for granted and none of them even considered to assist. She took it as a big disrespect to great heroes and took it very personaly.

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Thing is, they're quite likely the best fighters in Ponyville right now. They're not just their regular vocations, they're also the Elements of Harmony and seasoned heroines. They beat up Changelings by the dozens even before Twilight became an Alicorn. If Silver believes the ponies of Ponyville should throw themselves into these fights too, fine, but if any of them get hurt in the process or get in the way, I'm curious if she'll get told off for guilt-tripping them into doing so, or if she's simply going to be considered in the right by everyone again.

Applejack, for example, would have good reason to be p*ssed with Silver Spoon, both for getting her brother to risk himself and for interfering in the battle without being asked to. That would also give Alternate Silver Spoon a conflict that's not easy to solve and where she's not automatically in the right.

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