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Careful you can get banned for that.
Keep em coming!
If I would critique one thing, I mentioned in your last story of having him ramble to Rarity what he talked to Sweetiebell when she found them together. That was a bit much on the recounting things, HOWEVER don't be afraid to put a little more detail into the conversations. Instead of "He met granny smith and told her his story" have them converse a bit and then have him recount (quickly) about it. Just my two cents.
Still love it though
1008062 I didn't want to go too far into the minor characters as most of them will not be reoccurring. So a simple mention so people don't ask what happened to a character. It would be weird if Mike walked into the Apple's home and didn't meet Granny Smith. And when I ramble on its a reminder to the readers so they can recount the event that led up to the current one subconsciously.
1006976 There's an episode where Apple Bloom is writing in school with a pencil, in 'The Show Stoppers' Scoot is writing with a pencil.
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Tears of laughter were shed! X,D
I don't have any favorite CMC, but I would go with Sweetie Belle she just so adorable.
"I couldn't help think about how soft her lips would feel around my- NEVER MIND!"
Someone's lewdness being interrupted by those two words always cracks me up. Especially when they do it to themselves.
Makes me wonder what kind of things Scootaloo's uncle does to her, those creepy grins he gave means he does alot more than watch over her...
So did Mike like kill the dog cause right now that's what it seems like. I can't say how much I'm enjoying this.
1062955 , almost like he beats her or is a pedofile.
Scoots uncle is a pedophile lol
Has anyone noticed? It's always the creepy uncle.
Scootaloo face, I mean we have Apple bloom and sweetie belle why not Scootaloo XD fuck you Twist