Twilight and friends are going to a new college, ran by Martha White. Her all girls school has a strict education system:
*No Sports
*School uniforms only
*No pets {sorry Spike}
*No dating
*NO CREATIVITY ALLOWED
What happens to everyone who breaks the rules? And what will happen to our heroes?
Other for Lyra, BonBon, Maud Pie, Nurse Redheart, Vinyl Scratch, Octavia, Berry Punch, Minuette, Derpy, and Carrot Top.
Sex tag for some dirty talk.
Vinyl is mute in this story.
Based on a dream I had, I’m not sorry
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Chapters (4)
Hmm... This book seems rather rushed. Please do attempt to make your chapters longer. That aside, here are my theories.
Who's 4T?
There is not enough detail to guess the answer to this question. My apologies.
Who does Benny work for?
According to this, Benny may or may not work for Ms. White, as well as either working for or with the Bartender by the name of Pete.
Who is 'Her'?
In my opinion, judging by the basket of muffins, this 'Her' is most likely Derpy Hooves, whom is the pony who likes muffins the most in Equestria, although it is also possible that 'Her' might be Pinkie Pie, whom is an avid baker as most should know.
What is Benny ordering to drink?
Benny is most likely ordering an alcoholic drink of some kind, it is a bar, after all.
The beginning is a little rushed but it is a good start. Interesting. Will keep reading.
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Dreams are a bit hard to explain. But, thanks for the heads up. Chapter 2 will be little less pushed ahead.
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Thanks for the heads up
1. It will be answered later. But, it’s fine.
2. Correct, but not correct. Benny works undercover for an organization. The school so happens to be his mission. His last name is Lawrence.
3. Good guess, but no. Derpy’s next though.
4. Snapple Peach Tea
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yeah the start is little rushed. but i agree. like this start too. i'll keep reading
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Glad to hear that. Thanks for the follow too.
Main Questions:
Who do you think will be in Chapter 3?
What do you think happened in the fight?
Will Derpy make it?
How many times do you think Benny has been in a fight?
Thanks for everything everyone
I like this chapter. I love the charectors and thx for the info at the start. As i allready said i like this chapter Will defenetly keep reading. Good luck with the next chapter
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Sorry I couldn't respond earlier. But thanks. Glad to see you enjoy it. I am probably going to take a break from this story, mainly because I need to work on something else outside FIMFiction. I will finish this though. I will release the preview hopefully by the end of the year.
Thanks.
B.
Pretty good.
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I’m saying this now. Discord’s Ooze Machine is next.
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Im excited.
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But it will take a while. Hold your horses.
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lol sure. ^^