• Member Since 24th Nov, 2017
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Applegirl


I am a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints, Twijack friendshipping, and a girl who loves MLP.

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After Applejack and her siblings discovered the truth behind their family’s past especially their parent’s, they welcome Grand Pear, who was their maternal grandfather and also Pear Butter’s father, to their family. While the Apple-Pear Family are having fun together, one of them was not and Twilight wants to know why her best friend is so upset.

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I like the concept behind the story, but I'll be honest, the final product is rough. An editor would be a big help here in smoothing out matters like sentence structure and such.

Excellent story keep up the good work. And if you need help coming up with your next story idear

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